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Acrostic with rhyme 

*Deuteronomy 27:3 And thou shalt write upon them all the words of this law, ...which the LORD thy God giveth thee, a land that floweth with milk and honey; as the LORD God of thy fathers hath promised thee.

May 15, 2018 
3rd place, "New Poets Only" Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Emile Pinet; judged on 6/12/2018.

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Date: 9/2/2024 3:56:00 AM
Acrostic with rhyme *Deuteronomy 27:3 And thou shalt write upon them all the words of this law, ...which the LORD thy God giveth thee, a land that floweth with milk and honey; as the LORD God of thy fathers hath promised thee. May 15, 2018 3rd place, "New Poets Only" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet; judged on 6/12/2018.
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Date: 6/18/2018 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A creative acrostic rhyme - hard to do.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/19/2018 10:17:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/17/2018 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Beata! Keep on churning out excellent pieces such as this one! Well done! Pandita
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/17/2018 11:56:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/13/2018 1:45:00 AM
Congratulations, like your impressions of ps - have similar feelings - well expressed love always - V
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/17/2018 11:57:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/12/2018 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Beata! A wonderful ode to the soup :) blessings! xomo
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/13/2018 3:24:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.
Date: 6/12/2018 10:00:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful podium finish, Beata. Beautiful.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/13/2018 3:25:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.
Date: 6/12/2018 9:37:00 AM
Good job getting all those words in there, Beata! Congratulations on the contest win! -Cary
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Beata Agustin
Date: 6/13/2018 3:25:00 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.

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