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Acrostic with rhyme 

*Deuteronomy 27:3 And thou shalt write upon them all the words of this law, ...which the LORD thy God giveth thee, a land that floweth with milk and honey; as the LORD God of thy fathers hath promised thee.

May 15, 2018 
3rd place, "New Poets Only" Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Emile Pinet; judged on 6/12/2018.
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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 3:56 AM
Acrostic with rhyme *Deuteronomy 27:3 And thou shalt write upon them all the words of this law, ...which the LORD thy God giveth thee, a land that floweth with milk and honey; as the LORD God of thy fathers hath promised thee. May 15, 2018 3rd place, "New Poets Only" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet; judged on 6/12/2018.
Gentry Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations on your win! A creative acrostic rhyme - hard to do.
Agustin Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Beata! Keep on churning out excellent pieces such as this one! Well done! Pandita
Agustin Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Waters Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Congratulations, like your impressions of ps - have similar feelings - well expressed love always - V
Agustin Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 11:57 PM
Praise God. Thanks so much. I appreciate your comments.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your win Beata! A wonderful ode to the soup :) blessings! xomo
Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:24 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful podium finish, Beata. Beautiful.
Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:25 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.
Snowden Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 9:37 AM
Good job getting all those words in there, Beata! Congratulations on the contest win! -Cary
Agustin Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:25 AM
Praise God. Thanks! God bless you.
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