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PoetrySoup girl...It is now time; I hope writing this poem was worthwhile, And with this rhyme I made your heart smile. PoetrySoup girl...I wonder if you know, that this poem is about you? I'll be your Romeo and give you a little love that's totally new. PoetrySoup girl...I sat back and read all the comments you've made. Your words continue to ring in my head, and that makes me a little afraid. PoetrySoup girl...I'm use to being in control of all my emotions. You put light into my soul which glows and flows deep as the ocean. PoetrySoup girl...I read your poetry and see the beauty in the things you write. Your words just sing to me, and I'm wishing you were here tonight! PoetrySoup girl...I will do my best and show you passion you've never seen before. I'll put your body and mind to the test when I open your hearts door. PoetrySoup girl...Through my poetry I can do so much. I can give you ecstasy and have you tremble at my touch! PoetrySoup girl...I wish you could see the desire in my dark brown eyes. I aim to inspire as I take your body to paradise. PoetrySoup girl...Passion has no fear, and I admit I'm a freak! I'll continue to persevere until I have you sweating my technique! PoetrySoup girl...I say there's nothing wrong, exploring all the taboo. This love could be strong, but it's totally up to you........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/20/2011 1:10:00 AM
Somehow I missed this one..really touches the heart and very believable too...love,Deb
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:27:00 AM
totally drawn me in, liked it very much, felt iwas apart of u for a moment :)
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Date: 1/8/2011 5:24:00 PM
great stuff x
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Date: 1/8/2011 4:57:00 PM
Whoa. This is a good write. Attachment, and connection, with fellow poets does make for 'ecstasy' at times, doesn't it. Very good. Deb ps. thanks for reading and commenting on my senyru.
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Date: 1/6/2011 7:29:00 PM
jimmy! i have not commented in long enough! this was a god piece filled with some wonderful lines and emotion. i have enjoyed this and apologize for my lengthy absence. will be commenting more soon and replying to our poetry in motion! --Madison
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