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(This poem is a recipe made of a few words written on this site, combined to a tasty magical soup :) )

Two tired souls
 Final farewell on a dark horizon
  Proving care
   Enjoyable reality check
    A cherry apple cider moment
     A bed called sunshine
      One day
        on a particular sunday
         - Something in the air today-
             The feeling of the first happiness
               timed passageyour moving
                 wild and untamed
                   YOU ARE
                     symbols gone
                      fleeting time
                        just within reach
                          turning sand
                           ..................
                            ................
                             ..............
                              ...........
                               .........
                                .......
                                 .....
                                  ...
                                   .
                               SILENCE
                                    .
                                   .
                                     .
                                       .
                                      .
                                     .

 @ arranged by Lotte (written by many poets)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Duncan Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 10:05 PM
Well done this is :)
Solis Radius Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM
WONDEFUL!!!! Thank you for your TALENT!!! Wish you a nice weekend, Rita ^^
Makama Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 1:31 PM
This is awesome... Thank you so much for this wonderful share
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 2:46 PM
I love the form you have created with this clever write:-) Hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 1:20 PM
- A soup mixed with sugar and salt - Well done, Lotte ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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