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Poetry Soup

Poetry Soup April is a lucky day When I discovered you! I set aside cooking Because you fill my appetite! I set aside cleaning Because you cleanse my soul! I set aside sleeping Because you keep me awake! Then, I forgot to mail my bills Because I tarried with you overnight! Then, I was forced to read the poetry forms And yet, I am still confused! No regrets whatsoever Because I admire you!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2013 10:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Dalila. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 7:08:00 AM

Dalila, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/8/2013 1:54:00 PM

Very cute I enjoyed reading this! Congrats on your featured poem! Laura

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:18:00 PM

Thanks for your comment Laura, This was one of my first pieces in Poetry Soup, then I was learning the ABC's of poetry writng.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/8/2013 8:27:00 AM

nice tribute to Soup congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:22:00 PM

A beautiful "Shadow" name. Thank you for reading my piece.

Milton Toran

Date: 8/8/2013 7:22:00 AM

By the way, a great tribute to a great poetry community! Congratulations on your featured writing!...Milt

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Milton. My hubby is a poet, he was instrumental in putting me back to this art.

Milton Toran

Date: 8/8/2013 7:20:00 AM

I've explored other poetry communities. Poetry Soup is by far the best!...Milt

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:24:00 PM

I agree!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 5:06:00 AM

I am stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry today and I wish to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with much inspiration Dalila. Love, Carol

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:25:00 PM

Carol, how can I forget your name...how are you?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 8:20:00 PM

Nice tributes, Dalila

Dalila Agtani
Date: 8/9/2013 7:26:00 PM

Dr Mehta I have not seen you in PS for a long time.