Notes About The Poem
Poetry Soup Contest
27/05/2024
Benjamin Bartley
8 syllables each line
Poetry Soup
Someone’s dreams and hopes set afloat,
sail across the poetry soup,
someone else’s tears, loss and heartache,
has just made me weep in my room.
I pen a song and sing it loud,
laugh with a limerick I wrote,
someone out there may smile a while,
and share the laughter with his spouse.
I admire a few for wisdom,
am in love with someone out there,
have lost a few over the years,
yet live on in poetry soup.
their love, goodness, poetic skill,
religions, beliefs or dogmas,
their humour, wisdom and sadness,
is brew we call poetry soup!
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