Poetry Question

Why do I have to 
wake to a misty morning,
hard thoughts 
beaten by memory,
small devils  
tumbling like children
over my eyes?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Schaeffer Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Exactly.
Schaeffer Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Thanks John.
Torres Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:50 AM
that's a good start though.. ^__^ nice poem! =)
Loving Iii Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 10:28 AM
A good poem. We start writing with this.
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