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Poetry Prompt: Eyes

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Brown 
Simple, earth
My eyes
Hang out with the cat
And they're greenish
Cuddle 
Snuggle the small dog
They dig deeper
Grounded in loyalty
Flecked with flakes of gold trust

My mother
My brother though...
How come some are the clear summer skies?

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Date: 8/13/2019 8:15:00 AM
Hi Raven I like how your eye's change reflecting those you are with, in this fine poem. Cool write.
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Raven Howell
Date: 8/13/2019 10:02:00 AM
Thank you! True story, you know?....

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