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Poetry Prescription

jaundiced swells
anemic sunset swooning…
  blood moon transfusion 

         07 May 2016

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 4:17:00 PM

I had no doubt this would fly high, David! Pleased to be proved right....congratulations:) // paul

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2016 11:07:00 AM

This was one of my favorites...Congrats on a great win David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Karam Misra

Date: 5/14/2016 11:40:00 PM

Each line paints a picture. Wonderful, David, and congrats on your win. ~karam~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 5:56:00 PM

ooohhh, this is fantastic, David. Congrats for your win. The imagery is off the hook!!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2016 5:40:00 PM

What incredible imagery David good luck in the contest ... I hope this places well for you:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2016 9:26:00 AM

fantastic image, david.. love this!..huggs

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/8/2016 9:19:00 PM

stunning !

Joseph May

Date: 5/7/2016 9:32:00 PM

Brilliant write David....best wishes

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2016 3:51:00 PM

You reached out of the box to create this lovely poem, David! I hope to see it on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul

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