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Poetry Portraits Iii

If I would love you unconditionally, would you always love me back? I told her, “No way, you can’t possibly be” The girl of my dreams finally escaping the wrinkles of my imagination On longitudes and latitudes, you are dotted in silhouettes This is not a suicidal love A feeling oh so lovely so powerful how could you possibly try to ignore I can’t stay asleep every minute I need to see your pretty face The deep well of sorrow is now covered And innocence regained Is she too perfect to be true? Maybe, maybe not! *Inspired by the PoetrySoup mix bowl of talented artist writers*

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Tavarus M. Moreland

Date: 9/18/2010 2:57:00 PM

C, the concept is mine. For the past months, I have wrote blogs and included credits for exactly what lines writers have contributed and this was for the last contest I held and only did that to honor the contestants. Commercially, it will never be distributed without prior consent and permission. Additionally, I respect your wishes and will not include any of your lines although that was the previous contest and I do not repeat myself as I believe in growth and going to the next level.

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2010 8:40:00 AM

Question, are you using the words of the poets on the soup, to create your own poetry ? Please do not use my lines in your poetry, although in this particular one, I am not seeing any of my lines, but in others, I think I am, I do like this poem however, is it yours or other poets words.. I see you have a new contest, just to let you know, I will not be entering it, it is quite beyond me.. best of luck with that contest.. should be very interesting.. Constance

Susan Palli

Date: 9/8/2010 2:52:00 AM

I enjoyed it

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/6/2010 6:54:00 PM

Wonderful again... all three of your Portrait Poems...!! How I've missed these, I don't know. But will enjoy reading more of your work! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 12:24:00 PM

SOUP MAIL..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/3/2010 2:18:00 PM

Tavarus... first ..thankxxx for my second place in your awesome contest... appreciated and can use the cash right now ...second.. thankxxx for the dedication u put into this contest... I just congratulated your winners list and the poetry is super magnifico....third... thankxxx for being a dedicated sponsor and poet to present such a dynamic contest to offer poets... please soup mail me as u have Carrie and I as second place winners.. and don't know how the prize works with two winners..luv.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/18/2010 8:00:00 PM

Another wonderful magical write Tavarus... your words flow as easily as the ocean waves splash against the sandy shore.. just a lovely photo shoot in the mind of the reader ... a painting in words my friend.. enjoyed this creative piece from your gifted pen..luv..from Italy..ciao..