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Poetry Police

Dust and humdrum mute my senses, blurring.. fading.. dulling. Vehicles scream, jolt me awake. I stare into the distance, the oblivion. The bustle inspires...... and I write.

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/7/2016 12:45:00 AM

I think I can identify with this feeling here...this was really good. Hope this poem did well for you in the contest -I'm sure it did! MC

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/2/2016 8:54:00 AM

Wow...this is a great write...I need to try this form. :) Deserved win!!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/18/2016 5:36:00 PM

An awesome sijo!! Congrats Sneha, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/16/2016 10:33:00 AM

Great sijo here, Sneha. I can see the moment vividly, as the sudden change sparks a thought. Judging by comments it looks like you penned a winner, too :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/17/2016 1:53:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Very glad you liked it.. :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 4:50:00 PM

I enjoyed this lovely Sijo, Sneha! Big cheers to inspiration!:) Congratulations on yet another winning entry! // paul

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/16/2016 1:41:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your lovely comments and support!! :) :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2016 2:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/16/2016 1:42:00 AM

Thank you so much!! :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:30:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Sneha - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Anne Lise!! :) :)

Karam Misra

Date: 5/14/2016 11:49:00 PM

Congratulations in your placement, Sneha. Loved your poem. ~karam~

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2016 1:56:00 AM

Thank you so much!! :) :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/14/2016 6:57:00 PM

Hi Sneha, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the 'short forms' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2016 1:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support, dear Sandra!! :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 6:22:00 PM

This is really nice, Sneha. Not necessary to tell the point of view! It's almost like he has two different sources of inspiration: the bustle AND staring into oblivion. Congrats in my contest.

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/15/2016 1:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Andrea!! Glad you like it! :) :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/9/2016 8:33:00 AM

Well done, Sneha. Inspiration can wake up in us in the most unusual circumstances! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv
Date: 5/12/2016 5:22:00 AM