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Dust and humdrum mute my senses, blurring.. fading.. dulling.
Vehicles scream, jolt me awake.  I stare into the distance,
the oblivion. The bustle inspires......   and I write.

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

October 7, 2016 at 12:45 AM

I think I can identify with this feeling here...this was really good. Hope this poem did well for you in the contest -I'm sure it did! MC

Pace Ink-U-Script

July 2, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Wow...this is a great write...I need to try this form. :) Deserved win!!

Teddy Kimathi

May 18, 2016 at 5:36 PM

An awesome sijo!! Congrats Sneha, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Timothy Hicks

May 16, 2016 at 10:33 AM

Great sijo here, Sneha. I can see the moment vividly, as the sudden change sparks a thought. Judging by comments it looks like you penned a winner, too :)

Sneha Rv

May 17, 2016 at 1:53 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Very glad you liked it.. :) :)

Paul Callus

May 15, 2016 at 4:50 PM

I enjoyed this lovely Sijo, Sneha! Big cheers to inspiration!:) Congratulations on yet another winning entry! // paul

Sneha Rv

May 16, 2016 at 1:41 AM

Thanks a lot for your lovely comments and support!! :) :)

Bl Devnath

May 15, 2016 at 2:14 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Sneha Rv

May 16, 2016 at 1:42 AM

Thank you so much!! :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 15, 2016 at 5:30 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Sneha - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sneha Rv

May 15, 2016 at 6:49 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Anne Lise!! :) :)

Karam Misra

May 14, 2016 at 11:49 PM

Congratulations in your placement, Sneha. Loved your poem. ~karam~

Sneha Rv

May 15, 2016 at 1:56 AM

Thank you so much!! :) :)

Sandra Haight

May 14, 2016 at 6:57 PM

Hi Sneha, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in the 'short forms' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sneha Rv

May 15, 2016 at 1:56 AM

Thank you so much for your support, dear Sandra!! :) :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2016 at 6:22 PM

This is really nice, Sneha. Not necessary to tell the point of view! It's almost like he has two different sources of inspiration: the bustle AND staring into oblivion. Congrats in my contest.

Sneha Rv

May 15, 2016 at 1:55 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Andrea!! Glad you like it! :) :)