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Poetry Palace

Poetically poised on a dainty hill Overlooking ever blue seas Eagerly awaiting this surreal ILLUSION Turrets made of imaginative calligraphy Ruins that echo CREATIVITY Yearning to belong in this poetic home Paddle your toes in the moat of letters Allowing the INFUSION of words to make a sentence Listen to beautiful melodic lyrics in the great hall Attic of ancient and famous sonnets ghostly sing Carrying you EVENTUALLY to high emotional state Ending up, it's INEVITABLE that you live forever on the dainty hill By Emma Buckeridge For contest "Poetry Palace" 2nd place win

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Date: 5/22/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congrats Emma on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Love, gautami
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:02:00 AM
Emma beautiful poem , poetry at it's best. Anne
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:23:00 PM
Simply wonderful poem you have writen... Daniel fletcher;)
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Date: 5/20/2011 9:33:00 AM
Emma,that's beautiful.Many congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:08:00 PM
Emma,. CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:35:00 PM
Lovely poem Emma.Congrats on your 2nd place win.
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work...Sara
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:49:00 AM
congrats on your featured win cory
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:23:00 AM
Outstanding, Emma. Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of linda, Emma
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:33:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Emma : )
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:45:00 AM
smokin', emma... with matching congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your second place win in my contest with this creative write.. thankxx for supporting my contest luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Emma
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:36:00 PM
Emma this was a wonderful and creative piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Emma. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/15/2011 6:07:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:25:00 AM
Oh... love this!! Indeed, this should do well, Emma! It carries me up to that castle on the dainty hill...like a magic tale in a nursery rhyme!
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:35:00 AM
Emma you took yours to a whole different level, quite brilliant I would so.. So many highlights but the "Attic of ancient and famous sonnets ghostly sing" stood out for me.. Wishing you all the best for the contest ;)
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:25:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Emma..good luck ..thankxx for your sweet critique also on my poetry.. I read my entries in full as judging time draws closer . ..am sure will be amazed and hope u had fun creating this piece for my contest..
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Date: 5/15/2011 4:41:00 AM
One may never want to leave this poetry palace of yours! My favorite room is the attic of ancient and famous sonnets....great ideas there. The palace on a hilll overlooking the ocean is another great image...best of luck in the contest! Have a great weekend. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/15/2011 1:44:00 AM
Just revisiting this little gem. It's fantastical!
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:55:00 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest with nice images, deep and meaningful, Emma
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:03:00 AM
Reads like winning material..Very creative approach..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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