Poetry On My Poetry

Over the years emotions became my muse
Dealing with Wayne’s death was my mother’s bequeath
Putting a knack for writing poems to good use
I found light following these shadows of death
 “Mother’s Empty Room” was the first poem I wrote
Looking back I see a lot of cliché quotes
Word’s shedding pain flowing from my finger tips
Now I’m able to write a few silly quips


Written 01/12/13
For Russel’s “Poetry about Poetry” members contest

Form: Rispetto, with  ababccdd rhyme, 8 lines with 11 syllables each line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Delaney Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Writing ais so cathartic both for the writer and the reader, Thanks for all you share.
A  Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 7:13 PM
congrats :-) SKAT
Nair Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Debra!! Jag
Duncan Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Yes, it's a release that we can write our emotions down, I started keep diaries around age 16 and poetry same time. Now I must read "Mothers Empty Room"
Johnson Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Reflections of our own request. Looking back at what was best. We learn to take it all in stride. As we travel on this poetic ride. :/ :)
Widjanarko Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Great penned Debra, and sorry for your lost, thank you for share such a beautiful poem and encoraged me through a warm greets in my pages :) - hug, yanny
Ali Bhat Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 1:14 PM
i started writing after my Dad's death...Word's shedding pain.....oh!! i can totally identify with that...thanks for ur visit..
Trifiatis Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Not silly at all! On the contrary your writing is superb and your expressions marvelous. Keep poetry flowing and feeling keeping your heart warm! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 9:55 PM
I can't recall if I have seen mother's empty room poem of yours? This makes me want to check it out!!!
Squyres Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 12:27 PM
I will have to look it up and post...it's not very good, but it is dear to my heart.
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