Poetry Occasionally Can Be:

like
passing
kidney stones
I have saved mine
so I can brag on the little bastards…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devnath  Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A   Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your awesome Poetry POEM win. Stop by my blog "POETRY THERAPY." if you'd like... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Wonderful win Tim...SK
A   Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Guzzi Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:00 PM
LOL only YOU would think of this cher! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 4:05 PM
LOVE THIS> Big congrats.
Lindley Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Congrats on your win!!!!
Gasun Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 1:00 AM
Congratulations on this great tectractys poem and great win my dear friend Tim! thank u so much for sharing. love and hugs, Leonora
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:17 AM
clever metaphor!!!! :)COngratulations!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:34 AM
Brilliant write Tim ! Congrats on great win!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Nice message with this fine tetractys, Tim
Dey Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:02 PM
Well written....Congratulations
Mohn Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Clever little poem Tim...congrats
A   Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Happy 4th Tim, , Congratulations, thank you EVER SO SO much... Keep Enjoying my contest, and my latest blog "Some Poems Are:" if you like. See you around, :) LINDA
Jerden Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 5:35 PM
I think I'll pass on the kidney stones, but I know what you mean. Cheers, Roy
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 9:26 PM
hahahaha. WHAT a great little poem, or should I say kidney stone?? heehee
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