Poetry Limb

waves to me in wind
leaves flagging spring’s fast defeat
summer’s shady win.


May 8, 2016
Short Poetry Contest
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Poteet Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 6:52 AM
very nice use of words, Rita, excellent haiku.
Devnath  Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:28 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Rita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 6:15 PM
I liked that play on words in the last line, Rita. A cute KU. Congrats in my contest.
Adebayo Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Deep but lovely...thanks for sharing your mind
Gazbowski Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 2:04 PM
nicely penned Rita.
Simmonds Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 4:20 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Lovely haiku Rita good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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