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waves to me in wind leaves flagging spring’s fast defeat summer’s shady win. May 8, 2016 Short Poetry Contest

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/17/2016 6:52:00 AM

very nice use of words, Rita, excellent haiku.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2016 2:05:00 PM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Rita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 6:15:00 PM

I liked that play on words in the last line, Rita. A cute KU. Congrats in my contest.

Femi Adebayo

Date: 5/11/2016 6:12:00 AM

Deep but lovely...thanks for sharing your mind

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/9/2016 2:04:00 PM

nicely penned Rita.

Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/9/2016 4:20:00 PM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2016 3:28:00 PM

Lovely haiku Rita good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx