Poetry Keeps a Day

Poetry will not keep you warm
Not like a cat nestled between legs
But, it hunts down manic thoughts
Gnashes the static till the mind gives 
Chases a thought till claws are bloody
Keeps you drenched in sweat
Yes, she mews for attention
Till its cries grate every nerve
Till I feed it words & want 

Poetry keeps me squirming
Caught in a net skimming a deluge
Waiting for words to be hauled
The big catch ever escaping  
Keeps me checking the line
Insisting I jump into cold waters
Foolishly like Ahab chasing a tail
Sadness is my white whale
Mad with promises holey

Poetry is a leaky bucket
Catching the rain of words
Within depression's storm
Coming like a cat with a pail
Impossible and torrential
Ensnaring me for an hour
Keeps me back for seconds
Promising an easy catch
Cold and slippery
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Ashley Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Dear Triny, I am enthralled with your beautiful use of metaphor and engaging wordplay. A captivating piece that captures the gnawing, elusive sometimes brutal process of creating poetry with vivid emotion, vibrant imagery and pristine poetic finesse. A sumptuous display of your poetic gift. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Xiang Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:38 PM
Dear Susan, I'm tickled with what you've dredged up in sepulcher of my words. Your cat has dragged in such compliments to pretty on my shelf. I hope your muse terrifies words into submission. Thank you.
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