Poetry In The Rain


Ode to Rain Drenched Paper And Rapidly Disappearing Ink Stains
Previously Penned a Moment Ago, Dissolving, Swirling Cyclone of Water and Ink down the Drain!
Silly Poet Stranded, Emotionally Sifted And Strained
Enchanted by Calliope's Impish Minstrel
Base Cappella of Rumbling Thunder, I Shudder!
Serendipitous and Wet, Expatriate Poet Without An Umbrella!

For You  See I was Haunted and Teased By Moisture Filled Breeze
I Reached With My Pen and Tickled the Heaviest Cloud In the Sky With Ease
Silly Poet Provoking Poetic Rain, Prodding The Water Supply 
Tickled and Poked With My Pen, The Cloud Bellowed, Then She Cried
Prism In A Pearl Raindrop In Custody of  The Now Smirking Nimbostratus
Under Hyades Guard, My Penalty For Intrusion Pending Status!

Sitting In Humid Air, Amidst the Jury of Haughty Rain Nymphs Stares
I Should have use the Feathery End Of My Pen for the Inked Tip Created A Tear
Silly Poet, Drenched In Conjured Rain, Penalty for Pain, I must Rhyme Away From Here!
I Should Have Visited Erato's Garden to Borrow Her Myrtle Wreath!
Or Even Tea and Biscuits with Melpomene Could Have Been a Theatrical Treat
Euterpe's Sultry Flute Interrupted My Internal Musing, Rainbow Cruising Inky Hues
Silly Poet Seeking Poetry's Muses In The Conjured Rain In The News!
Conjured Rain Trance, Whimsical Chance, Pen In Hand, Here I Stand! Poet Pseudonym Debut
I'm Soggy, Not Sorry For My Attempts To Pen In the Rain, I Will Try Again, No Shame!
For Now My Sentence Has Come To An End, The Paper Filtered But Never My Pen!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/2/2024 7:18:00 PM
Inventive and humorous Carlene. Hey, good to meet ya
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Carlene Juju The Dragon
Date: 7/3/2024 6:38:00 PM
Hey Tom, thanks for the feedback...Nice to meet you!
Date: 7/1/2024 3:53:00 AM
dear carlene, this is so creative and so artistic! You have a way with weaving words, i was in awe captivated, inspired by how youv depicter poetry in rain. i must especially highlight the line "I Reached With My Pen and Tickled the Heaviest Cloud In the Sky With Ease" wow! a line i wish i had written! and its so deep, metaphorical treat! "I'm Soggy, Not Sorry For My Attempts To Pen In the Rain, I Will Try Again, No Shame!” yes and you should keep inking in rain, and be proud! Pleasure readn,FAV
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Carlene Juju The Dragon
Date: 7/1/2024 4:55:00 AM
BlissFul Moonday Empress! Thank You for your encouraging words, I'm Uplifted, Honored and Humbled by your Feedback. I really wish there was a "Poetry In The Rain" Contest, especially with Hurricane Season currently. It was amazing creating this piece alongside Raindrops! I will try it again.
Date: 6/30/2024 9:30:00 PM
Delightful!
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Carlene Juju The Dragon
Date: 7/1/2024 4:57:00 AM
Thank You! Light & Ink Salutations!
Date: 6/30/2024 8:54:00 AM
Dear Carlene, your use of literary devices is divine! Your verse is filled with clever wordplay, vibrant imagery, rich metaphors depicting the creative struggle in a palpable, playful way. I adore your internal rhymes, assonance that lends breezy musicality to your imaginative, expressive verse. A sumptuous poetic experience where your creative verse and golden artistry shine as brightly as the June sun. The mythical elements elevate this piece too. Loved this, a fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Carlene Juju The Dragon
Date: 6/30/2024 12:34:00 PM
Thank you Susan, The Rain was falling hard and my imagination took off without me, lol.. Thank you for your Uplifting Presence and for taking time out to share your Light with me. Thank You!
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