Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Poetry In Motion

life is poetry in motion,
a variety of emotions.
poetry, a stress reliever,
my veins bleed the creative potion

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Who am I?
The caped crusader,
a romantic motivator.
Inhibition, not I!
You can  call me the womb raider...
Never stray, not a trader.
baby, I'm yours forever.
Who am I?


Sinister thoughts create hypnotic images.
Adventure through the mind of this
Vanilla, word-play magician>>>do you see my
Vivid images?>>> this poem is for
You..>>>are you still blue?

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These veins bleed the creative potion,
my soul flows through this pen.
Using every variety of emotion,
life is poetry in motion....


Jared Pickett
11/23/09
Asavvy1

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Richard Pickett December 23, 2009 at 8:03 AM Rollin, rollin, rollin... this is poetry in motion...Well done Son...Dad

Izzy Gumbo December 4, 2009 at 11:30 PM Well done and vivid yes :) Your motion... in poetry is wonderful my friend.

Mary Meade Stephenson December 2, 2009 at 4:26 PM This is creative, flows well, rhythm, flow, and rhyme are exceptional. Thanks for sharing Jared. Mary

Richard Pickett December 2, 2009 at 12:52 PM That's my boy... You are Poetry in motion...Well done.. A Chip off the old block...I think it's collaboration time Son and we can wow them...Dad

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 29, 2009 at 8:15 AM Soup Mail ... "Sweetie" on Sunday..

Raul Moreno November 26, 2009 at 12:14 PM This one is loaded with a lot of great lines, I see your work improving with each write. Keep up the good work...Raul

Doris Culverhouse November 24, 2009 at 5:28 PM enjoyed today!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 23, 2009 at 8:20 PM Drawn back to the "motion" from your comment posted.. the novel u spoke of .. are the best kind .. but the action is the best... thankxxx and I am happy I have stirred up a number of "juices" this evening from all the feedback from my postings.. may we all be "in euphoria" at one time or another in our lives... did u read "football potpourri"? .. don't know if u are a sports nut but this is a good one... keep on truckin' baby.. "Sweetie"

Moonbee Canady November 23, 2009 at 6:51 PM "Womb-Raider ... Jared, I, Scared ... LOL (I had to come back and say that ... he he ha ha hey... MoonBee

Moonbee Canady November 23, 2009 at 6:50 PM Oh, This Is Excellent, Jared ... Very Powerful- Confidence ... (I LIKE THAT) smile... Make A Woman Want To Tip-Toe Around You (smile)... Oh, and You're Next Due for A Dedication ... getting to know you (I'm singing that song - corny, but true LOL... MoonBee

John Freeman November 23, 2009 at 5:09 PM An amazing play on words, my Man. Cape crusader, Romantic motivator. Sometimes I feel as if my own veins bleed the creative potion, of emotion. Good Job, Man, Sincerely, Moses

Charmaine Chircop November 23, 2009 at 1:01 PM Poetry in motion:)i love every verse,there is nothing i dont like..Poetry in Motion,your blue pen by your side...,Hope your poem in motion reaches the lady these lovely verses are intended for..After reading this im sure she ll be happy and blue days will be gone,,sweet poem indeed.Asavvy--Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 23, 2009 at 12:01 PM A romantic motivator, huh? will keep that in mind for collaboration purposes... soup mail me with ideas... whenever u r ready... on whatever u think would fit Asavvy 1 and "Sweetheart" .. like your flow of words too.. catchy rhythm too.. luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick November 23, 2009 at 10:04 AM Love the line that starts "Vivid images through to blue". Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara