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Poetry Held Captive

Poetry held captive, I can’t find my words If I scream them out loud, they would still go unheard Poetry held captive, imagination is stained Soiled my inspiration, now I’m stricken with pain Poetry held captive, nowhere to be found My mind speaks a thousand tongues, but there is no sound Poetry held captive, no way of escape Violating my expressions, committing lyrical rape Poetry held captive, I can’t find my voice My heart no longer sings; there’s no need to rejoice Poetry held captive, I can’t find my verse Without it I’m lost, as if I’m cursed with a curse Poetry held captive, where are my thoughts Daggers piercing through my mind, it’s like poetic assault Poetry held captive, alone and distraught I’ve searched high and low, my lyrics are sought Poetry held captive, it longs to be freed Release this hold you have, take these chains off of me. Chiquita Baity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/9/2011 6:52:00 AM
YOU aren't being held captive right now are you? lol miss seein your new poems!
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Date: 8/16/2011 1:53:00 PM
at times we all feel dat way, when no matter how u try the words will just not come. i love it and i must confess .......u are good.
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:19:00 PM
I think we've all been there my friend. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful write dear!
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Date: 8/12/2011 12:02:00 PM
Hello Chiquita...I'm trying my darndest to feel your lack of write, yet I find it in every stanza here dear poet, words spilling on slip, which is truly an encouragement for those of us who do have moments of blank ! It seems, even with your "writers block", you have brilliantly caused poesy to fill this page with thought ! And this day, you go down as one of my favorite poets ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend...much love, james
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Date: 8/12/2011 12:08:00 PM
May 30/2011, you may appreciate the write of mine, "Empty halls of blank" !
Date: 8/11/2011 4:23:00 PM
A very powerful and passionate poem about the frustrations and anguish of writer's block! Well done! Robert.
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Date: 8/11/2011 3:38:00 PM
a very creative write, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Rite Spot.
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Date: 8/11/2011 1:33:00 PM
Staring at a blank page Words that won't come out Causing your mind to rage Look for something you have never seen Perhaps a cloud up in the sky With a mental ease The words begin to fly :-) Sorry...I just had to write. I loved the poem <3
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Date: 8/10/2011 1:30:00 PM
Sound like lamentations of a writer in block but I'm sure you are not the writer because the poem will contradict it. Hahaha. An excellent write,Chiamaka. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 8/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
Baity - maze of thoughts often arrest the flow of poetry. But you have done well to kidnap the hijacker !!! I appreciate your kind comments on my work Dad Son Dad. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 8/10/2011 6:17:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem...actually been there !!!!!!!!!!wonderful write!!! Thank you for your kind comments I appreciate it!----Lori
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Date: 8/10/2011 2:52:00 AM
Rather seems to be you been held captive and your words are free... well written:D
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Date: 8/10/2011 2:24:00 AM
Thanks for the love chiquita! I like this piece you wrote :) very well written!
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Date: 8/10/2011 2:22:00 AM
Your poetry isn't held captive. It flows easy, free and delightful.
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Date: 8/10/2011 2:03:00 AM
Oh my, this is how I feel sometimes..Love this writing...Enjoyed..jo
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