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In one of her recent poems, "In Simplicity," our international poet friend, Brandy Nicole, made us aware of the "Minute Poem." This is my first attempt at this form of poetry.  Needless to say, it took me more than a minute to write it :)  Thank you, Brandy!

Form ~ Minute Poetry

The Minute Poem is a rhyming verse form consisting of
12 lines of 60 syllables, formatted in 3 stanzas of
8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is aabb, ccdd, eeff

 

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Date: 8/4/2018 9:42:00 PM
Very well composed with this format. I admire. Warm Wishes
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Mark Toney
Date: 8/6/2018 9:45:00 AM
Much appreciated, Anisha :)
Date: 8/4/2018 3:22:00 PM
GOOD job with this form, Mark. Janice
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Mark Toney
Date: 8/4/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 8/3/2018 3:40:00 PM
Love this form, never tried it, yours would be hard to top. Comforting thoughts, thanks for sharing them...
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Mark Toney
Date: 8/4/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind encouragement, Charlie :)
Date: 8/1/2018 5:05:00 AM
Sweet and succinct and then sweet some more. A joy to read, Mark. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mark Toney
Date: 8/1/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, kind CayCay :). You’ve made my day!
Date: 7/31/2018 6:14:00 PM
This is awesome, Mark. (And I almost never ever use that word. First time in years). Great write!!! ~Gershon
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/31/2018 10:06:00 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed it, Gershon; and I very much appreciate your super encouraging comment!
Date: 7/30/2018 9:13:00 PM
I feel exactly the same way, and like this poem with intensity.
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 10:47:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. What a nice compliment!
Date: 7/30/2018 6:52:00 PM
A lovely tribute to our wonderful community, Mark.
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 10:43:00 PM
Why thank you, Line :)
Date: 7/30/2018 3:15:00 PM
One of things I like about this group is the chance to learn about new forms of poetry - will have to try this out sometime!
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 6:49:00 PM
Michelle, I like that about this group too ;)
Date: 7/30/2018 3:14:00 PM
:) Awe, and this is penned perfectly Mark. I am happy that you tried this. It is fun and of course takes a little more than a minute to create. But worth it in the end. I have at least two other forms I shall post here one day, maybe three. I enjoyed reading your friendship poem. :) Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/31/2018 11:25:00 AM
Soft smile. :) That's all you can do.
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/31/2018 9:19:00 AM
Done. We'll see what happens :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/30/2018 8:50:00 PM
You are welcome Mark. Maybe you could send this form in to Poetry Soup. :) That is totally up to you. ~ Brandy
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 6:48:00 PM
Yes, it was fun, and I appreciate your bringing it to our attention. I think it would be a great form for a poetry contest. Thank you, Brandy. I look forward to seeing the other forms :)
Date: 7/30/2018 2:35:00 PM
I see what you mean...It's a flow that comes naturally...All the best Mark
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo. It was hard to get my head around it at first, but I like the results.
Date: 7/30/2018 12:38:00 PM
Awesome poem :)) xomo!
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Mark Toney
Date: 7/30/2018 12:42:00 PM
Awesome comment from an awesome poet! Thanks, Maureen :)

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