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Poetry For a Softer Spring

Some syllables strewn along paths in rows,
spent images cast aside where wisdom grows.
In ruffled rubble a glean glints in tones -
missed stars settled amidst sparkling stones.



Taken from "The Poem Makers" written 3/23/2020
Rithimus Divisa 4
Gregory R Barden

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/29/2020 4:25:00 PM
Your stunning snippet definitely deserves an imminent look up, viewed in entirety. How sweet, deep, impressive, Greg. Commend you!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 8/30/2020 11:37:00 AM
Your clever critique is most encouraging and greatly appreciated. Thanks muchly.
Date: 8/28/2020 6:02:00 PM
Your title is almost as sweet as your poem, Greg. Congrats for making it to the winner's list.
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Date: 8/28/2020 5:14:00 PM
Nicely done congrats Greg in Greg's contest!
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