Greg Gaul Poet Rhyme

Poetry For a Softer Spring

Some syllables strewn along paths in rows,
spent images cast aside where wisdom grows.
In ruffled rubble a glean glints in tones -
missed stars settled amidst sparkling stones.



Taken from "The Poem Makers" written 3/23/2020
Rithimus Divisa 4
Gregory R Barden

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Sigrid Ermine August 29, 2020 at 4:25 PM Your stunning snippet definitely deserves an imminent look up, viewed in entirety. How sweet, deep, impressive, Greg. Commend you! Greg Gaul August 30, 2020 at 11:37 AM Your clever critique is most encouraging and greatly appreciated. Thanks muchly.

Jenna Logan August 28, 2020 at 6:02 PM Your title is almost as sweet as your poem, Greg. Congrats for making it to the winner's list.

John Hamilton August 28, 2020 at 5:14 PM Nicely done congrats Greg in Greg's contest!