Poetry Dreams In Other Realms Contest Premiere Contest Winner

Once upon a magical evening, an enchanted fairy I happened to see,
dressed in a fantastical dress with two dappled wings of lace.
She shone like the midnight sun—
I must confess, she looked rather whimsical,
sitting there by a green wooden door, waiting for your lore.

The door was set in an ivy-cloaked wall,
half-hidden beneath where the ancient trees fall,
their roots like fingers, gripping the stone,
in a forest where time stands alone.

Sunlight dripped through the emerald haze,
turning mist into gold in that secret place.
The fairy looked up with a twinkle-eyed grin,
and whispered, “The path to dreams lies within.”

She opened the door with a creak and a sigh,
and the moss-covered world seemed to breathe and reply.
A stairway of cobbles descended below,
to realms where forgotten wild wonders grow.

Now when I sleep and the twilight swells,
I walk once more through other realms—
past the wooden door, through the forest seams,
guided by whispers and purple dreams.

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Date: 5/20/2025 8:54:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful. I love to write and read fantasy, where everything is possible! Congratulations!
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 6/5/2025 5:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/13/2025 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Jeanine, congratulations on your top spot…Beryl
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/14/2025 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/9/2025 12:14:00 AM
I really like the concept and brevity of this poem. Congratulations on your winning.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/14/2025 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/7/2025 1:51:00 PM
Beautifully done Jeanine, writing as smooth and fine as the fairies wings.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/14/2025 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/6/2025 4:15:00 PM
Your poem was awesome full of creativity, congrats on your 1st place win
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/7/2025 3:07:00 AM
Thank you so much
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