Poetry breathes You

Take me where poets go to weep, ink never sleeps and hearts bleed deep. In silence, I long for a cathartic dawn. This canvas knows no frame for vain verses. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears. As poetry breathes your name, amidst darkness.
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Nicholsen Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 6:21 AM
Lovely write very well written. blessings
Thacker Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Wonderful! Thank you for sharing, Empress.
Miller Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Oh wow, this is just perfection.
Croft Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love your poem.
Poet Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your trophy win, it's a great honor to share with you the podium dear Ink.
Sidwell Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Absolutely exquisite! A poem to be read repeatedly.
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Dear Robert thank you so very much truly im grateful
Roses Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 1:06 AM
Speechless, if there was a vault for perfect poems, I would add this one!
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Your comment i truly appreciate, thank you for saying that. I never ever think of my poems this way but it gives me hope when readers feel my words. Grateful truly
Iqbal Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 9:20 AM
Wow your title brought me here reading this and as always I didn't regret.. your words are magical and deep, even when you write not so long. Loved it dear!!
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:01 AM
Thank you so much
Pandit Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 5:36 AM
So very poetic, Ink. Much depth you convey in just a few lines.--this canvas knows no frame for vain verses-- so true and well said.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Dear Vijay, i am grateful for your kind feedback, so constant and so encouraging always. I hope you will always know im so very thankful!
Volumes Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Magic in your words, smooth sensation as they are welcomed into my thoughts. A poetic delight of rhythmic ideas and soulful utterances to warm the heart. Oh did I mention that I like this poem ? (Very Much). <3
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Dear Sv, that means so much to me truly. Thank you so very much for your kind and generous feedback im grateful
Greenhough Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 7:21 PM
A poem of deep thoughts and waning sadness. Poetry will always breathe your name.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Dear Hilda Im always grateful for your kind and generous support
May Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Very nicely penned Empress, I enjoyed the read
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Thank you so very much dear joseph, im grateful
Rose  Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Poetry never sleeps, so let it keep vigil with you dear poet, always keen on your writes, blessings and flowers I, E,
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Ah sometimes when im numb i feel like ink sleeps on me, thank you so very much sweet rose you are truly a poetic blessing
M  Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 1:52 PM
Oh sweet Ink….what a talented poet you are! Incredibly beautiful! Debx
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Dear deb, its always such a pleasure to hear from you sweet soul! Thank you and i hope you are doing well, sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 1:43 PM
I love this one, Ink. It's got just the right amount of imagery to keep it lucid and totally wows me.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:26 AM
Wow thats a massive compliment coming from you dear andrea. Thank you so very much truly
Hind Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 1:12 PM
Very, very beautiful- I loved the whole poem itself, all the lines spoke to me. I can see a clearer picture of you, keep your light! <3
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thank you for seeing me dear paige.. i appreciate you always truly
One Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 12:08 PM
This must have been hard for you only six lines..I can see you love for poetry and how much it means to you and you seem to breathe poetry so well and elegantly.. nice to see something different from you..
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:43 AM
Ah i was feeling numb when i wrote this, and i meant to express my longing to feel something, etc some emotion, and despite the darkness i still feel my beloveds presence thats wat my last line means. Hah! Thank you so much for always reading dear! Arent you the kindest
Poet Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 11:43 AM
The longing for a place of solace and release, where emotions can be expressed freely through poetry dear Ink. The power of poetry as a means of catharsis and the intense emotions that fuel it. You use evocative language to create a sense of emotional depth. The use of words such as "weep," "ink never sleeps," "hearts bleed deep," and "frozen tears" conveys the intensity of emotions expressed. A powerful poem, always my pleasure to read you.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:30 AM
Ah dr sotto, you always understand the depth of my poems, thank you so very much for reading and for leaving such detailed and mindful feedback: im truly grateful always for your poetic support and presence
Cornish Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:40 AM
Yes, the magic of expression creates purging and doesn't inhibit it - here, you are uninhibited - simply a glint of thought in that darkness - in freedom to smile/hope/live/release/love...
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Dear craig, your comments are as poetic, such an honor to receive your thoughts, thank you so very much truly
Herrick Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 10:27 AM
Extremely poetic, Ink Empress. This reminds me of unwritten feelings the heart keeps secret, but is called to write, even if not the words the populace wants to hear. Of course my bias is unshakable as I go into the read. Plus, "This canvas knows no frame for vain verses. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears. As poetry breathes your name, amidst darkness." One can get many allusions from this, which is a mark of poetic poetry. Much enjoyed.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Ah you’ve really understood my poem, im always grateful when readers feel and leave mindful comments on my poems as sometimes my poems can be hard to decipher. Thank you so very much your comment is so very uplifting.
Onpaper Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Take me where poets go to weep,.. the bed aee!!! My poet weeps in the bed the toilet!!! Can la .. This canvas knows no frame for vain verses... aaah yes yeees papi… but the frame of my knuckles feel a lil vain aee.. XD.. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears... aaaae the cold never bothered me anyway.. As poetry breathes your name.. ok all jokes aside… look at how gorgeous ur piece is !!! Poetry breathes ur name??? I mean I wish I had a man say that to me!!!
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Lol ill write for u papi dun chu worry
Lane Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Ink, if such a place permanently existed, I'd certainly not wish it to be found by anyone. Although, if one were to feel the heat of frozen tears, it would mean the tears had been warmed to the point of melting, perhaps by a loving hand or kiss. I find love in your lines... maybe not the romantic kind, but the kind that deserves admiration.
Lane Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:20 AM
I understand. No more nightmares, but at least you talk about them in your poetry, so it's your way of facing them.
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Dear Lin lane, thank you so much for your very mindful and sincere comments, i was feeling numb when i wrote this, nightmare for me as i only express through poetry, hence why the longing to be where poets weep, to feel emotions. Appreciate your support truly
Rhymes Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 7:38 AM
I love the opening line …. It’s just pure talent .
Empress Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Awwn thank you dahlin i always appreciate your comments
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