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Poetry breathes You

Take me where poets go to weep, ink never sleeps and hearts bleed deep. In silence, I long for a cathartic dawn. This canvas knows no frame for vain verses. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears. As poetry breathes your name, amidst darkness.

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/4/2024 6:21:00 AM

Lovely write very well written. blessings

Shane Thacker

Date: 2/9/2024 2:27:00 PM

Wonderful! Thank you for sharing, Empress.

Terry Miller

Date: 1/27/2024 9:50:00 AM

Oh wow, this is just perfection.

Karen Croft

Date: 1/26/2024 8:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love your poem.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/26/2024 10:35:00 AM

Back with heartfelt congratulations on your trophy win, it's a great honor to share with you the podium dear Ink.

Robert Sidwell

Date: 1/26/2024 9:25:00 AM

Absolutely exquisite! A poem to be read repeatedly.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 10:00:00 AM

Dear Robert thank you so very much truly im grateful

Roses Roses

Date: 1/21/2024 1:06:00 AM

Speechless, if there was a vault for perfect poems, I would add this one!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 10:01:00 AM

Your comment i truly appreciate, thank you for saying that. I never ever think of my poems this way but it gives me hope when readers feel my words. Grateful truly

Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 1/20/2024 9:20:00 AM

Wow your title brought me here reading this and as always I didn't regret.. your words are magical and deep, even when you write not so long. Loved it dear!!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/26/2024 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/17/2024 5:36:00 AM

So very poetic, Ink. Much depth you convey in just a few lines.--this canvas knows no frame for vain verses-- so true and well said.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:57:00 AM

Dear Vijay, i am grateful for your kind feedback, so constant and so encouraging always. I hope you will always know im so very thankful!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/16/2024 11:04:00 PM

Magic in your words, smooth sensation as they are welcomed into my thoughts. A poetic delight of rhythmic ideas and soulful utterances to warm the heart. Oh did I mention that I like this poem ? (Very Much). <3

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:56:00 AM

Dear Sv, that means so much to me truly. Thank you so very much for your kind and generous feedback im grateful

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/16/2024 7:21:00 PM

A poem of deep thoughts and waning sadness. Poetry will always breathe your name.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:49:00 AM

Dear Hilda Im always grateful for your kind and generous support

Joseph May

Date: 1/16/2024 5:35:00 PM

Very nicely penned Empress, I enjoyed the read

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:44:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear joseph, im grateful

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/16/2024 4:46:00 PM

dearest Ink--your love for poetry is evident in the words you wrote. I'd love to go to that place 'where ink never sleeps.' Wouldn't that be divine? I believe poets are rare folks who seek catharsis in the words they write--they want to share that experience hoping that others, too, can receive catharsis vicariously. I admire what you did here in just a few lines...you've got talent extraordinair...have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:44:00 AM

Ahhh dear sara you always make me feel good enough thank you for your sweet and kind feedback im truly grateful always for your support

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/16/2024 3:03:00 PM

Poetry never sleeps, so let it keep vigil with you dear poet, always keen on your writes, blessings and flowers I, E,

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:32:00 AM

Ah sometimes when im numb i feel like ink sleeps on me, thank you so very much sweet rose you are truly a poetic blessing

Deb M

Date: 1/16/2024 1:52:00 PM

Oh sweet Ink….what a talented poet you are! Incredibly beautiful! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:31:00 AM

Dear deb, its always such a pleasure to hear from you sweet soul! Thank you and i hope you are doing well, sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2024 1:43:00 PM

I love this one, Ink. It's got just the right amount of imagery to keep it lucid and totally wows me.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:26:00 AM

Wow thats a massive compliment coming from you dear andrea. Thank you so very much truly

Paige Hind

Date: 1/16/2024 1:12:00 PM

Very, very beautiful- I loved the whole poem itself, all the lines spoke to me. I can see a clearer picture of you, keep your light! <3

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 7:25:00 AM

Thank you for seeing me dear paige.. i appreciate you always truly

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2024 12:08:00 PM

This must have been hard for you only six lines..I can see you love for poetry and how much it means to you and you seem to breathe poetry so well and elegantly.. nice to see something different from you..

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:43:00 AM

Ah i was feeling numb when i wrote this, and i meant to express my longing to feel something, etc some emotion, and despite the darkness i still feel my beloveds presence thats wat my last line means. Hah! Thank you so much for always reading dear! Arent you the kindest

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/16/2024 11:43:00 AM

The longing for a place of solace and release, where emotions can be expressed freely through poetry dear Ink. The power of poetry as a means of catharsis and the intense emotions that fuel it. You use evocative language to create a sense of emotional depth. The use of words such as "weep," "ink never sleeps," "hearts bleed deep," and "frozen tears" conveys the intensity of emotions expressed. A powerful poem, always my pleasure to read you.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:30:00 AM

Ah dr sotto, you always understand the depth of my poems, thank you so very much for reading and for leaving such detailed and mindful feedback: im truly grateful always for your poetic support and presence

Mat Ignacio

Date: 1/16/2024 11:24:00 AM

a powerful and memorable write - a pleasure to read

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your comment grateful always

Craig Cornish

Date: 1/16/2024 10:40:00 AM

Yes, the magic of expression creates purging and doesn't inhibit it - here, you are uninhibited - simply a glint of thought in that darkness - in freedom to smile/hope/live/release/love...

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:23:00 AM

Dear craig, your comments are as poetic, such an honor to receive your thoughts, thank you so very much truly

Jude Herrick

Date: 1/16/2024 10:27:00 AM

Extremely poetic, Ink Empress. This reminds me of unwritten feelings the heart keeps secret, but is called to write, even if not the words the populace wants to hear. Of course my bias is unshakable as I go into the read. Plus, "This canvas knows no frame for vain verses. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears. As poetry breathes your name, amidst darkness." One can get many allusions from this, which is a mark of poetic poetry. Much enjoyed.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:09:00 AM

Ah you’ve really understood my poem, im always grateful when readers feel and leave mindful comments on my poems as sometimes my poems can be hard to decipher. Thank you so very much your comment is so very uplifting.

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 1/16/2024 9:37:00 AM

Take me where poets go to weep,.. the bed aee!!! My poet weeps in the bed the toilet!!! Can la .. This canvas knows no frame for vain verses... aaah yes yeees papi… but the frame of my knuckles feel a lil vain aee.. XD.. You'll never feel the heat of frozen tears... aaaae the cold never bothered me anyway.. As poetry breathes your name.. ok all jokes aside… look at how gorgeous ur piece is !!! Poetry breathes ur name??? I mean I wish I had a man say that to me!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:08:00 AM

Lol ill write for u papi dun chu worry

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 1/16/2024 8:07:00 AM

Exquisite write, Beloved Soul ! You truly are an Angel Poet ! Take me with you to that weeping place .! Fascinating this line - the heat of frozen tears ! You intrigue me. THANKYOU too for your beautiful feedback on Twinflames. I appreciate your thoughtfulness & time. Great Blessings to you too for 2024. What a wonderful year it feels : exciting yet fearful which should bring out the best poetry yet. Love you ??

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:07:00 AM

Ah you are such a kind sweet soul iv missed reading your comments! So happy to see you here. I hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for leaving your cosmic light across my pages of poetry. Grateful truly always

Ghairo Daniels
Date: 1/16/2024 8:09:00 AM

Oh golly, no question mark behind you !

Lin Lane

Date: 1/16/2024 8:00:00 AM

Ink, if such a place permanently existed, I'd certainly not wish it to be found by anyone. Although, if one were to feel the heat of frozen tears, it would mean the tears had been warmed to the point of melting, perhaps by a loving hand or kiss. I find love in your lines... maybe not the romantic kind, but the kind that deserves admiration.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/17/2024 6:20:00 AM

I understand. No more nightmares, but at least you talk about them in your poetry, so it's your way of facing them.

Ink Empress
Date: 1/17/2024 6:06:00 AM

Dear Lin lane, thank you so much for your very mindful and sincere comments, i was feeling numb when i wrote this, nightmare for me as i only express through poetry, hence why the longing to be where poets weep, to feel emotions. Appreciate your support truly