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Poetry is a tranquil balm Healing for one’s frangible heart A symphony of peace and charm The tempo climbing up the chart. Healing for one's frangible heart A roam through undiscovered land The tempo climbing up the chart Led from the palm of the poet's hand. A roam through undiscovered land Idioms of dreams fantasy Led from the palm of the poet's hand An escape from reality. Idioms of dreams fantasy Scenes from a golden long ago An escape from reality. O’er the breeze fond echoes blow. Scenes from a golden long ago A symphony of peace and charm O’er the breeze fond echoes blow Poetry is a tranquil balm. 13th December 2020

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2020 2:27:00 PM

Reads like a good contender to me. Poetry can be a balm or a flame stirrer for it is so versatile it can be anything. Enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/15/2020 2:37:00 PM

Hi Sara, versatility - that’s the beauty of poetry. Thank you very much... Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/14/2020 11:57:00 AM

But what is spectacular is one's command of the language! Well done! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/15/2020 2:35:00 PM

Spectacular it is, thank you for stopping by Rico... Belle

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 12/14/2020 9:45:00 AM

You did very well. Not easy to write a pantoum. Best for a win. ~~

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Victor, Pantoums aren’t that easy, but fun to do. All the best ~ Belle

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/14/2020 8:50:00 AM

Ah, Belle, a most beautiful pantoum. Indeed, poetry is a balm for breakable hearts. I love the use of the word "frangible", a wondrous word. I melted into the splendid and healing spirit of your soothing poem. The vivid yet tranquil imagery truly is a "A symphony of peace and charm"! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2020 9:54:00 AM

Susan, thank you so much for your heartwarming, charming and encouraging review of this Pantoum, I truly appreciate your kindness... Best wishes~ Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/14/2020 7:35:00 AM

WoW!Belle, You have a well-written entry for the contest. Poetry is so amazing. At times it has been a refuge for me. I enjoyed the calm tone and vibe of your write. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2020 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, poetry has been therapeutic to me through some tough times, and a joy during good times. Enjoy the rest of your day too... By :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2020 2:04:00 AM

- What a wonderful poem Belle, I enjoy this with my morning coffee :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/14/2020 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, you have a lovely day too. Hugs~ Belle :-)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/13/2020 2:33:00 PM

I feel tranquility in the smooth flow of your words, Belle!! This balm tranquilizes my aches!!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/13/2020 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Newton, that’s so good to read, keep using the balm of tranquillity... Belle