Poetry and Obsession

Only time will tell, so I take a close look deep inside me;
For I know I'm under her spell, but she can tell from the words in my poetry.

She can read the couplets of my heart, and feel the smoothness of this rhyme.
I loved her from the start, and I give her every minute of my time!

She knows where I stand, and that I'm her number one fan.
She finds comfort in taking my hand, and calls me her man.

I'm attentive twenty-four seven, and I submit to her every need.
She takes my body and mind to heaven with such amazing speed!

I make sure she orgasms first, and then I finally get mine.
People may say I'm cursed, because I claim our love is so well defined!

But I know I'm just a man in love, utterly devoted to her in every way.
Her gorgeous body I can't get enough of , and she's become apart of my D.N.A.!

I make her feel secure in the warmth of my strong embrace.
The love I feel is so pure, and my heart still melts at the sight of her angelic face!

She's just completely amazing, and she'll always hold the number one spot.
She's a drug I'm constantly craving, and I'm her Knight like Lancelot!

So let this be the last couplet I write, and end this confession.
She is the food that quenches my appetite, and this is still Poetry and Obsession!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/23/2010 11:23:00 AM
Wow! You did it again, JAM! Excellent! Poetry Obsession, indeed! Much love, Audrey PB
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:14:00 AM
I loved the way you did this poem and enjoyed reading it. God Bless Phyl
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