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Poetry Alouette

longer than Haikus this the form i use till my inspiration gone five five and seven in lyric heaven my pen just writes on and on. like treasures of gold my words in heart hold a wealth of thought and feeling spill out upon page enhanced through the age this my way of self-healing. © Harry J Horsman 2014

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Date: 9/7/2017 6:25:00 AM
”Alouette, gentle allouette...Je te plumerai.”It was a song by the time when as a child I was learning French (avec beaucoup d`autres comme: Sur le pont d Avignon...on y dance...on y dance). Indeed: it is a lovely attitude to take care of thoughts, words and deeds and keep spirit in the hand of light.Your ”words in heart hold a wealth of thought and feeling”.
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:19:00 PM
so true so true Hey Harry how are you? Light & love
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Date: 9/15/2014 4:00:00 PM
oh, Harry, this is SO pretty. I just love how you related your entry to poetry!! The only little thing i did not like was your use of haikus in the plural. haha. If this had been with perfect meter, it would have soared into first place!!! congrats on my winners' list.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations Harry. Very well said, this my way of self-healing. It seems most of us do this in one way or another.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:33:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Harry :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:10:00 AM
Be proud! This is good...very good. congrats. BG
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:10:00 AM
congratulations harry, love this one xx
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:02:00 AM
I love the message in your poem Harry. I feel the same. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/13/2014 5:01:00 PM
well put Harry..'
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Date: 9/13/2014 4:36:00 PM
exquisitely done and so soothing , harry.. thanks for your prayers for sara.. huggs
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Date: 9/11/2014 1:25:00 PM
When your down and kneeling and your head is just reeling. It's nice when something lift's you up. When the floor is the ceiling and you have trouble dealing. Just turn it over and fill up your cup. Hey Harry. So nice when you visit. May your pen fill with zen, again and again. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:58:00 AM
I like this... Thank you. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
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Date: 9/9/2014 7:26:00 AM
Love it! Writing is wonderful therapy.
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Date: 9/9/2014 5:50:00 AM
how unique and right on the dot, harry.. I like.. huggs
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:22:00 PM
Great that you Alouetted your way through healing..Way to go ...Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2014 2:01:00 AM
I can never believe you are out of inspiration when words flow from you like a sparkling brook, full of wisdom and poetry xx
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:38:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Alouette decorated with nice style and treasures. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 9/7/2014 12:38:00 PM
- Your poem is like "treasures of gold" .... always, Harry - Beautiful! - All the best to you "old" friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 10:07:00 AM
wonderful poem and the final line speaks volumes to me and I guess many others who post here:-) Hugs Jan
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