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P: People O: Offering E: Everlasting T: Talent, R: Rule Y: you

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Femi Joey Oloidi

Date: 11/22/2012 4:05:00 PM

Thanks Robert, it's so sweet of you to come up with a wise and healthy suggestion. But truly; i'll leave it the way it is. Because it's true, for eg; the wise rule, the dump don't. The brave lead; the weak don't, and the smart and vigilant; take it all, not the most knowlegable. So it's a harsh world already; whats the need to hide the truth? The wise simple rule, not the fools! Thanks ones more,n keep up the good work.

Robert Jerore

Date: 11/14/2012 10:46:00 AM

A suggestion my friend... why not try R: Revere or Revitalize. Rule appears to be quite harsh, and restrictive. I am more inclined to think People Offer Everlasting Talent if they think there is potential. Just a thought...YarnSpinner

Femi Joey Oloidi

Date: 7/30/2012 4:40:00 PM

@ Vienna, u are such a jem. You got it so so right! It couldn't be better explained, I will simply just call it 'poeticalology' *smiles* I went through some of your poems, they rock and it's so graced! Kingfemi.