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Easy blue etching
End to end sleepwalk
Rains without water
Rocks full of blood
An uneasy daydream
Covering a nude urge
O, I undid something
Before unravelling it
And I have undressed
A little shyness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/24/2011 9:30:00 PM
S.j.... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
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Date: 12/23/2011 7:12:00 AM
I did not receive any soupmail from you Jag. Enjoyed reading your Poetry poem however. First poem I have read this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2011 5:07:00 AM
Good poem .... A peaceful Christmas I wish for you. OXOX hugs from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/22/2011 9:52:00 PM
oooh,that is called showing,not telling us, which is just what poetry should do!! Love those last two lines, Jag.
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:42:00 PM
Would love to have a nude urge Jag, sounds exciting! :) Last two lines are so sweet, tells me something about you!
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Date: 12/21/2011 5:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jag. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:40:00 PM
Hi SJ..... Long time no read! ha ha. It is as tho you are describing yourself as an onion and poetry allows the layers to slowly be peeled.....raw and unabridged! Enjoyed. Great metaphors. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/20/2011 4:57:00 AM
Reminds me of my last (really bad) hangover ;-)
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