S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Free verse

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Easy blue etching
End to end sleepwalk
Rains without water
Rocks full of blood
An uneasy daydream
Covering a nude urge
O, I undid something
Before unravelling it
And I have undressed
A little shyness.

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Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2011 at 9:30 PM S.j.... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 23, 2011 at 7:12 AM I did not receive any soupmail from you Jag. Enjoyed reading your Poetry poem however. First poem I have read this morning. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen December 23, 2011 at 5:07 AM Good poem .... A peaceful Christmas I wish for you. OXOX hugs from Norway and Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2011 at 9:52 PM oooh,that is called showing,not telling us, which is just what poetry should do!! Love those last two lines, Jag.

Elizabeth Wesley December 21, 2011 at 5:42 PM Would love to have a nude urge Jag, sounds exciting! :) Last two lines are so sweet, tells me something about you!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 21, 2011 at 5:39 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jag. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song December 20, 2011 at 5:40 PM Hi SJ..... Long time no read! ha ha. It is as tho you are describing yourself as an onion and poetry allows the layers to slowly be peeled.....raw and unabridged! Enjoyed. Great metaphors. Gwendolen

Darryl Davis December 20, 2011 at 4:57 AM Reminds me of my last (really bad) hangover ;-)