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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Got it right here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
George   Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 10:59 AM
Exactly! Wonderful Senryu, Raul. I find this form difficult and must work on writing one soon. Thank you for sharing.Also, I wish to thank you for all your kind comments and support over the last year. Best wishes to you in the New Year. Lainie.
Mckenzie Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Raul~ Well said, you captured the true essence of a poet! Love Laura :) Happy New Year!
Strand Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 12:45 AM
Praise the Lord for it Raul.Hapy New Year.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
Byrne Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 9:52 PM
The joy of commentary! Nice one.
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December 26, 2009 at 6:36 PM
What a wonderful message in this one. It's the everyday people that seem to communicate on a level everyone can understand. Keep up the good writing! Happy New Year! Karen
Fuller Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Thank you for your encouragement Raul. Isn't this work of yours a beautiful statement about what we try to do in our daily lives, and our poetry.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 6:10 PM
Amen Raul... no truer words were written that I can recall.. great write... enjoyed... blessings...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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