POETRY

Parade of ideas in word or phrase Onyx thoughts like chocolate cake Eager emerald ears listen to hear Teal thrill words like happy new year Riding licorice lips like kente kite Yellow words finger painting life!

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/8/2024 10:19:00 AM

A beautifully done poenm. Pabgie

Karen Jones
Date: 1/8/2024 11:27:00 AM

Pangie thanks!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/7/2024 4:32:00 PM

Oh, I liked this one, Karen. I loved 'parade of phrases'--a beautiful way to explain poetry. Outstanding use of similes and images. have a pleasant evening, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 1/7/2024 4:54:00 PM

So glad you like it Sara! Thanks and good evening.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/7/2024 3:40:00 AM

Oh this poem plays with colours, a creative acrostic poem indeed, dear Karen.. Describing poetry as a parade of phrases and then your similes create a wonderful flow here! "Riding licorice lips like kente kite Yellow words finger painting life" Yesss painting life with the hues of poetic palette... Enjoyed reading this.. Sending you light ~ :)

Karen Jones
Date: 1/7/2024 4:30:00 AM

You are so kind Hiya! Thanks for reading! Hugs love and light to you!