Poetry

Delicately words are placed gently Woven to explain our thoughts So descriptive used aplenty Secrets and lessons that we're taught Often sending out messages Laying hidden within our lines Taking the reader on a voyage An emotional ride by our design All forms perhaps some rhymes Metaphors with personification Paradox's, different irony is so sublime Opening minds to use imagination Sharing our most inner dreams While we attempt to become whole Releasing thoughts as they stream To let poetry touch another's soul

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John Fleming

Date: 6/28/2020 4:03:00 PM

This really is very good. Brenda...simply just rolls off the tongue with such consummate ease -- lovely poetry! Lots of warm thoughts this night. :) john

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2020 6:46:00 PM

I totally get lost when an author places a, "Often sending out messages Laying hidden within our lines." Nicely said. Hugs Eve

John Hamilton

Date: 5/1/2020 5:34:00 PM

What would we do without poetry?// I guess we'd have to talk to each other! Nicely said Brenda, hope you are feeling better!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/2/2020 3:59:00 PM

Thank you John! Yes I am a bit better! Trying but this damn virus is kinda scary!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2020 2:52:00 PM

You summed it up perfectly Brenda, nice to see you back, hope things okay now. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/1/2020 5:21:00 PM

Tom thank you so much! I am feeling a bit better thank you!;)

Joseph May

Date: 5/1/2020 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful write Brenda, I like all the inner workings of a poem, especially the hidden messages that may lay within...Hope all is well Brenda, Peace and Blessings.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/1/2020 5:21:00 PM

Joseph thank you so much! Yes I love the hidden messages too!;)