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""Woven are these pages in poetic verse, With bare threads of our deepest feelings, You will find laughter, tears and remorse, and words of wisdom, prayer and healings."" Written are these phrases from the heavy heart that until this moment remains broken. Healing verses mend the separate halves that part by the beauty of language that is spoken. Metaphors and simile express the fire that smolder in the bosom of a writer who only seeks to send to you with fond desire a verse to make our weary lives much brighter. 4/23/20 Poetry Anthology add your stanza Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Krish Radhakrishna

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Date: 5/14/2020 4:46:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 5/3/2020 12:05:00 AM
Great write Janis..Woven beautifully with the first stanza.. Congrats..
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Date: 5/2/2020 6:41:00 PM
Janis, I just love the healing aspect your brought to your write, and the lightening of another's burdens. Keep up the great writing, healing, and lightening, my friend. Congrats! ~ John
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Date: 5/2/2020 1:19:00 PM
Great poem! Wonderful write! Congrats on your win! One of the stanzas make it to the poetry soup anthology I will be putting together! Well done!
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Date: 4/23/2020 7:42:00 PM
Yes! Beautifully and seamlessly penned, Janis. A real winner! :) Gershon
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/24/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. I appreciate your supportive comments.
Date: 4/23/2020 2:55:00 PM
Really nice Janis - seamless from the original stanza through your additions! Love all the poetic devices mentioned! Good luck in the contest.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 4/23/2020 5:01:00 PM
Thanks for the well wishes Sam. I appreciate it. Keep safe.

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