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POETICALLY SPEAKING


Words
     verbs
aimless
     adjectives
 amalgams of verse
 unshaped until 
imagination's birth 
bursts
   fly free
on unfettered wings
 blown to 
&fro
    to settle 

 long 
forgotten dreams 
 as words floating 
 as petals
    on a stream
a fragrance that lingers 

 a passage of light
    inspiration
  delineated  
as
a  thought 
 ribbon 

 originality 
conceived perceived
crystallised
   in relief
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Edmonds  Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 1:50 AM
Congratulations Brian, a well deserved poem of the week award… Beryl
Bartley Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Nice flow. Very masterful. Good to see you adorned. Thanks for sharing.
Seeker Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 1:10 AM
Penned in your trademark poetic style! Congratulations on POTW, Brian.
Nicole Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:06 PM
' words floating as petals on a stream, a fragrance that lingers. ' I'm smiling at this thought, because I see poetic moments in way most of the time. : ) Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Brian, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Gifford Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:43 PM
Hello Brian, Congratulations on winning POTW with your beautiful poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "POETICALLY SPEAKING" write. Have a Blessed day writing away with your wonderful win....................
Jones Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Well done Brian! Congratulations on potw status!
Kitchin Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Brian, nicely penned. Congratulations on POTW.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:26 AM
outstanding! The perfect poem for POTW....hearty congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 3:57 PM
Love this, Brian. A fave
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