Poetically Mime

POETICALLY MIME The vast ash-leaden clouds are in tears again... The soggy tears like boxing fists - casting bruise and blues below. Unlike yesterday where they mirror gentle caress to branchlets and blossoms smiling in gratitude as they are showered free, the dust and dirt slithered to them were cleansed swept by the warm - cold kisses of heaven's cry. Condescending, blooming sunnier hues of greens, standing poised and aplomb amidst, respiring anew! Rainy days chant tunes of melancholy at times particularly to those who are lost. Alone. Afar. However, it has to happen for it is nature's rhyme. Let it be as heaven's cry a bosom of poetic mime. ___________________________________________________ POEM CONTEST: 265 REVISED to any form ANY THEME max of 20 lines ***9th Place*** SPONSORED by: Brian Strand Written January 21, 2017 @ 23:18 PM
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Smith Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Simply lovely Olive, congratulations. I am so pleased you shared these words with me...
Callus Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 12:33 PM
You have lost none of your poetic style and touch, Olive_eloi. Rain can be seen through contrasting lenses, and you have described them well. Hugs // paul
Kimathi Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Your words blend so well with flawless emotions.... Congrats Olive, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
Murray Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 3:16 PM
I remember the ash laden clouds after the eruption in Iceland. You describe them well here Olive. Congratulations on your placement.
Daniel Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:37 AM
What a lovely personification of rainy clouds, Olive!! Congratulations:)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Lovely, Olive! Congrats!
Polydoro Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful Poem, Olive - congrats on your placement :)
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