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Poetic Waters

Hummed poetic waves, Soothing whispers of the sea; Calm reciting surge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 7:48:00 AM
Awesome ... I think inspiration has built a nest inside your heart.
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Date: 5/24/2009 11:11:00 AM
your words are full of life and wonder you awe me in many ways great piece you got mail
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Date: 5/23/2009 12:42:00 AM
A beautiful write Raul,sounds percolate through the verse like the alliteration of the the last three syllables.On for my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:33:00 PM
LOVE THE TITLE!!!!! Your words are splendid Raul.
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Date: 5/22/2009 3:37:00 PM
I simply want to be there. Divine. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/22/2009 3:06:00 PM
Better and better....your haikus are wonderful!
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:12:00 PM
Wonderful imagery for a peaceful feel. Nice use of personification. Enjoyed this one! Karen
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:06:00 PM
mmmm. I love this. :)
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:19:00 PM
Hummed poetic waves, soothing line, very choral, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:33:00 PM
Cool I like this Raul good job. Love ELizabeth
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:30:00 PM
Facinating.
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Date: 5/22/2009 10:56:00 AM
Mail for you, Raul.
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Date: 5/22/2009 10:49:00 AM
cool i love this one great raul
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Date: 5/22/2009 10:47:00 AM
Very nice (again), Raul!
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