Poetic Waters

Hummed poetic waves,
Soothing whispers of the sea;
Calm reciting surge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Awesome ... I think inspiration has built a nest inside your heart.
Megens Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 11:11 AM
your words are full of life and wonder you awe me in many ways great piece you got mail
Strand Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 12:42 AM
A beautiful write Raul,sounds percolate through the verse like the alliteration of the the last three syllables.On for my favourites I think.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Bird Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 8:33 PM
LOVE THE TITLE!!!!! Your words are splendid Raul.
Winter Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 3:37 PM
I simply want to be there. Divine. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Better and better....your haikus are wonderful!
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May 22, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Wonderful imagery for a peaceful feel. Nice use of personification. Enjoyed this one! Karen
Gumbo Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 2:06 PM
mmmm. I love this. :)
Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Hummed poetic waves, soothing line, very choral, James
Neal Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Cool I like this Raul good job. Love ELizabeth
Shahwan Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Facinating.
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 10:56 AM
Mail for you, Raul.
Onate Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 10:49 AM
cool i love this one great raul
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Very nice (again), Raul!
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