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Poetic Tears

Paper rain showers over me...
With fallen letters drifting free...

Two words left on a scroll...
Page less thoughts left to hold...

Ticks on a clock still measure time...
From day to night it's a world of rhyme...
                             
Poetic tears that moisten my pen...
Dipped in the inkwell of now and then...

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Sean Goodwin Date: 12/1/2012 8:04:00 AM Ahh the page and the pen, sometimes I think they are the only true friends I've got in my life. Wonderful poem Michael. -- Sean Login to Reply

Elenushka Toledo Date: 11/30/2012 6:37:00 AM You are a master poet!! I love how you penned your words Michael? Login to Reply

Shaz Cheesman Date: 11/27/2012 3:37:00 AM What a way you have with words.......very addictive reading your poetry :) Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 11/25/2012 3:38:00 PM Wow.......amazing write. So expressive of the heart of a poet. Thank you for sharing this couplet! :) I enjoyed living through the imagery! Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM very nicely written...love the way you out this piece together! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 11/19/2012 8:08:00 PM *put

Len Gasun Date: 11/19/2012 7:48:00 AM Gee! This is another superbly beautiful poem of yours Michael! Big congrats! Thank you so much again for sharing, your precious time visiting my work and your nice comments my dear friend! More power and blessings to you always! love/hugs, Leonora Login to Reply

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/19/2012 3:17:00 AM Excellent poem. Well done Michael. Login to Reply

Victoria Anderson-Throop Date: 11/18/2012 7:09:00 PM Hope the people in your life appreciate your magnificent nature.... Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 11/18/2012 6:35:00 PM Oh, beautiful write, Michael. I like "dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." It's true. It is a sum of who we are. Love ya, Toquyen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/18/2012 6:08:00 PM I love that soft nostalgic fade away into now and then, Michael. Lovely. As for my latest sonnet. I had to use those words Dalila gave us, so it was from HER mind that I got those ideas, indirectly you could say!!! Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/18/2012 5:31:00 PM I really enjoyed this read Michael, and really true, sometimes if we think too hard the blank page will show up, but when we think nothing but tears, it will start to heat up the engine in your pen :) Lovely poem - Hug, Yanny Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/18/2012 5:23:00 PM absolutely beautiful and touching .. sweet and tender those poetic tears Michael luv ... JG is very moved by your intimate emotion luv .. your words emit smiles for me .. and dry my tears .. returning luv and more more more as my favorite song says .. remember that one luv?? I dance to it everyday .. JG in dancing mode .. forever xoxo Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 11/18/2012 2:15:00 PM Fantastic write, Michael! Enjoyed it much! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/18/2012 1:05:00 PM just love this one, Michael - the last line is awesome Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/18/2012 11:20:00 AM This is an amazing poem from you Michael.A deep write.Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply

Shnkimmel Clarke Date: 11/18/2012 10:11:00 AM I like the style of how you write similar to mines Login to Reply

Holly Moore Date: 11/18/2012 9:10:00 AM This is very beautiful...poetry definitely takes hold of the poet. Thanks for the comment on my "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy!" xxxoo Holly Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/18/2012 8:21:00 AM Emotive work that is packed with feeling..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work..You presence there was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/18/2012 8:04:00 AM Ink on paper depicts the thoughts of poets compared with tears, nicely done. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 11/18/2012 5:30:00 AM Michael smooth romantic lines you have penned here, excellent...Dave Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/17/2012 11:10:00 PM wow Michael a deep writing here. loved each line. hug? dinda. Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/17/2012 6:37:00 PM This is a great rhyme and I really enjoyed this Poetic Tears, simple but caught my feelings :), thank you Michael for your kindly visit to my page, it is really a pleasure :D - Hug, Yanny Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/17/2012 4:40:00 PM ......nicely penned Michael...thanks for stopping by... Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/17/2012 4:00:00 PM Brilliant, this is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this superior and truly phenomenal poem this afternoon! There are definitely some poetic tears that I've shed in my lifetime, and there will be more to come I'm sure! What a powerful piece this one is Michael, Great Work!! Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/17/2012 4:08:00 PM Russell your comments always lift my spirits.. even when I'm sure what I wrote was any good...thank you....

Omneya Kamal Date: 11/17/2012 3:36:00 PM "Poetic tears that moisten my pen... Dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." I love this verse! I love all your Poem Micheal really so creative, Have a great week, Omneya Login to Reply Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/17/2012 4:07:00 PM Thank you Hun... glad the words speak to you...xx

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