Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Poetic Tears

Paper rain showers over me...
With fallen letters drifting free...

Two words left on a scroll...
Page less thoughts left to hold...

Ticks on a clock still measure time...
From day to night it's a world of rhyme...
                             
Poetic tears that moisten my pen...
Dipped in the inkwell of now and then...

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Sean Goodwin December 1, 2012 at 8:04 AM Ahh the page and the pen, sometimes I think they are the only true friends I've got in my life. Wonderful poem Michael. -- Sean

Elenushka Toledo November 30, 2012 at 6:37 AM You are a master poet!! I love how you penned your words Michael?

Shaz Cheesman November 27, 2012 at 3:37 AM What a way you have with words.......very addictive reading your poetry :)

Eileen Manassian November 25, 2012 at 3:38 PM Wow.......amazing write. So expressive of the heart of a poet. Thank you for sharing this couplet! :) I enjoyed living through the imagery!

Sandra Adams November 19, 2012 at 8:08 PM very nicely written...love the way you out this piece together! Sandra Adams November 19, 2012 at 8:08 PM *put

Len Gasun November 19, 2012 at 7:48 AM Gee! This is another superbly beautiful poem of yours Michael! Big congrats! Thank you so much again for sharing, your precious time visiting my work and your nice comments my dear friend! More power and blessings to you always! love/hugs, Leonora

Jon A Cavanaugh November 19, 2012 at 3:17 AM Excellent poem. Well done Michael.

Victoria Anderson-Throop November 18, 2012 at 7:09 PM Hope the people in your life appreciate your magnificent nature....

Toquyen Harrell November 18, 2012 at 6:35 PM Oh, beautiful write, Michael. I like "dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." It's true. It is a sum of who we are. Love ya, Toquyen

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2012 at 6:08 PM I love that soft nostalgic fade away into now and then, Michael. Lovely. As for my latest sonnet. I had to use those words Dalila gave us, so it was from HER mind that I got those ideas, indirectly you could say!!!

Yanny Widjanarko November 18, 2012 at 5:31 PM I really enjoyed this read Michael, and really true, sometimes if we think too hard the blank page will show up, but when we think nothing but tears, it will start to heat up the engine in your pen :) Lovely poem - Hug, Yanny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 18, 2012 at 5:23 PM absolutely beautiful and touching .. sweet and tender those poetic tears Michael luv ... JG is very moved by your intimate emotion luv .. your words emit smiles for me .. and dry my tears .. returning luv and more more more as my favorite song says .. remember that one luv?? I dance to it everyday .. JG in dancing mode .. forever xoxo

Kim Merryman November 18, 2012 at 2:15 PM Fantastic write, Michael! Enjoyed it much! Love, Kim

Jack Horne November 18, 2012 at 1:05 PM just love this one, Michael - the last line is awesome

Kash Poet November 18, 2012 at 11:20 AM This is an amazing poem from you Michael.A deep write.Enjoyed the read.

Shnkimmel Clarke November 18, 2012 at 10:11 AM I like the style of how you write similar to mines

Holly Moore November 18, 2012 at 9:10 AM This is very beautiful...poetry definitely takes hold of the poet. Thanks for the comment on my "Suicide and the Butterfly Boy!" xxxoo Holly

Sara Kendrick November 18, 2012 at 8:21 AM Emotive work that is packed with feeling..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work..You presence there was uplifting..Sara

Bl Devnath November 18, 2012 at 8:04 AM Ink on paper depicts the thoughts of poets compared with tears, nicely done. Loved always, bl

David Williams November 18, 2012 at 5:30 AM Michael smooth romantic lines you have penned here, excellent...Dave

Dinda Minardi November 17, 2012 at 11:10 PM wow Michael a deep writing here. loved each line. hug? dinda.

Yanny Widjanarko November 17, 2012 at 6:37 PM This is a great rhyme and I really enjoyed this Poetic Tears, simple but caught my feelings :), thank you Michael for your kindly visit to my page, it is really a pleasure :D - Hug, Yanny

Joseph May November 17, 2012 at 4:40 PM ......nicely penned Michael...thanks for stopping by...

Russell Sivey November 17, 2012 at 4:00 PM Brilliant, this is simply a brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this superior and truly phenomenal poem this afternoon! There are definitely some poetic tears that I've shed in my lifetime, and there will be more to come I'm sure! What a powerful piece this one is Michael, Great Work!! Michael J. Falotico November 17, 2012 at 4:08 PM Russell your comments always lift my spirits.. even when I'm sure what I wrote was any good...thank you....

Omneya Kamal November 17, 2012 at 3:36 PM "Poetic tears that moisten my pen... Dipped in the inkwell of now and then..." I love this verse! I love all your Poem Micheal really so creative, Have a great week, Omneya Michael J. Falotico November 17, 2012 at 4:07 PM Thank you Hun... glad the words speak to you...xx

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