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A poetess of simple expression in free flowing verse discrete words resonate with cadence of aria on a single string of violin the beginning paces down to the ending with no period as the tune keeps on echoing for long her verses are the surge of the mountain stream the course unpredictable carving the vale of impulse cascades down with poignant power the torrents of leaping water unleashed on gush race breathless over the ebullient rapids swirl around within mid-stream pools where in the obscure depth of passion the pearly beads of emotion lie sunk shrouded in enigma some feelings remain unexpressed With the broken strands of web of languid life and torrid times I try to weave simple tapestry of imagery in the poetry of heart. Rising from the dust of trampled path I fly on the shadow of the falling sky to the edge of the waiting horizon, as the twilight gleam sequesters me. January 14, 2010 Contest : You've Got Style Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/15/2020 2:13:00 PM
Subimal, I love the music references in your first stanza, nature in action in the second, and the imagery of sky / horizon / twilight in the third. Well done, and congrats on your top placement in Line's contest! ~ John
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Date: 1/15/2020 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful buildup and resulting cascade of powerful imagery. Superbly penned, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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