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Poetic Seeping

Crazed beyond this fragile manuscript ink now bled out in caustic flow emptying my mind of the clutter pouring from a heart beat’s mechanism grinding gears of rusted thoughts handwriting illegibly unrecognizable scratched into burned edge parchment pleading for destinations across borderlines and wastelands calloused fingers write…poetry between broken dishes and pot luck cuss words folded, creased and left lying on the desk gathering deadly dust particles behind the barricaded door of cranial creativity… seeping

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2016 4:42:00 PM

Yep. It's a surefire golden poem, Chris. The vivid expressions of the leakage of creativity is so artful. Great job on this one. Lube up the old noggin' w/some of nature's fruit juices, that'll get you going. Love the poem though. Love and many blessings to you.

Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 4:54:00 PM

Yep, just pour me a glass and I'll be writing something before long, but too many glasses and it might be tomorrow before I can read what I wrote. :) Thanks so much Freddie, your comments are always a wonderful gift to me.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/25/2016 2:00:00 PM

Excellent! Sounds like you have a lot to be published too! :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 2:03:00 PM

Thanks so very much Heidi, I don't know about that but I can't seem to control what comes out of me, so maybe yes. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/25/2016 1:21:00 PM

Calloused fingers write...poetry between broken dishes...Such humble hands write a masterpiece..A fave Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Charmaine for your nice comment on my dark poem. You definitely make the world much brighter with your visits.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/25/2016 12:16:00 PM

An overflown river of poetic creativity that floods the pages with expressions of language so masterfully displayed dear, Chris! Impressed! A seven!

Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 1:39:00 PM

Thanks so very much Demetrios for your wonderful comment on my poem. I appreciate your time today and your kind thoughts.