Poetic Release

Perfect time of Day,
Where emotions that have haunted me in Sleep have somehow stilled at bay.
My Hand once covered in rust,
Now have particles falling as I write in a rush....
Thoughts and words alike all in a rush.
My pen can hardly seem to keep up,
As this unexplainable substance fills my once empty cup
I feel as though I could write till my hand surrender's in pure discomfort 
As I fully submerge into this feeling...... Feeling of never ending fulfillment 

Nothing is like the release of a poetess,
As she fully succumbs to the pent up emotions -thoughts that have until now left her restless.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 4/20/2017 11:07:00 AM

You and your muse were one in this birth of a rare gem, a delightful expression of poetry and its gifts, heart and soul my friend! Exceptional verse, solid 7 and a fav...

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 4/20/2017 9:29:00 PM

Aww well thank You!! I really appreciate it and thanks for stopping by :) -Love Ettie

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/5/2017 12:10:00 PM

Loved this one... My muse are adventures wanting out!

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 4/13/2017 4:59:00 PM

Much love to Carol :) thanks for commenting -Love Ettie

Eve Roper

Date: 11/2/2016 8:29:00 PM

Poets, artists , and so on run through periods in time that our thoughts just stop and you know it's there, but sleeping. Then one day the light comes on and we can't seem to do everything at once :-) Hugs Eve

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/2/2016 11:39:00 PM

Exactly!! :) Thank you for your thoughts and kind words -Love Ettie

Justin Bordner

Date: 11/2/2016 6:52:00 PM

There are moments when a Poetress has absolute trust in her feelings, expressing them bravely, and beautifully, experiencing an orgasm of truth in her tender heart...this you know...J.A.B.

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/2/2016 7:38:00 PM

The total meaning of my poem spoken in your comment....an almost rapture of feelings so surreal it's breathtaking ....Thank you for Your comment -Love Ettie

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2016 6:41:00 PM

the final couplet is absolutely perfect Ettie and I agree that writing is such a great form of release of emotions - I never know what my muse is going to come up with next that is why I find writings such a wonderful hobby:-) it is almost 3 years to the day I wrote my first poem and I never want to stop! hugs jan xx

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/2/2016 6:50:00 PM

Thank you so much for commenting on my poem Jan! I've recently not ran to writing like I had in times past and that's caused a burden of sorts on me that I released in this peom.....April of this early year was 3 years since I found my way of escape through words and it's never let me down ... again thank you for the feedback -Love Ettie