Chris Green Poet Free verse

Poetic Praises

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I wandered about her
winding words
and whispered wishes,
strolled between her
somber stanzas and
passionate phrases,
lingered in her drifting 
sunsets of amethyst skies,
meandered beneath her
clouded days and
sunrise kisses, 
while walking through
each wonderful world
her thoughts had created
until I found myself
desperately lost…

which was my hope
all along

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Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 8:35 AM So gorgeous! Another fave for me today, my friend! I want to wander and pause in the loveliness of this poem! Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 8:54 AM You are far too kind to me Kim. Thank you so very much for this wonderful comment.

Regina Mcintosh November 1, 2019 at 4:56 AM Beautiful … happy writing and bless you, GIna Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 8:54 AM Thank you so much Gina.

Hello There October 31, 2019 at 11:24 PM When the essence of another's soul captivates one this way, it is like magic. And you are lost as if under a spell... and grateful to be. So beautiful, Chris :) Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 8:53 AM Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one.

Heidi Sands October 31, 2019 at 5:14 PM Wow, what a neat poem this is Chris. I love how you wrote this and put this together. Well done :) Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 8:53 AM Thank you so very much Heidi. I appreciate your kindness.

Gershon Wolf October 31, 2019 at 4:47 PM Desperation never sounded so romantic to me. Love where you took this, Chris. Warming wishes, Gershon Chris Green October 31, 2019 at 4:55 PM Sometimes it is nice to just be lost. : ) Thank you my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire October 31, 2019 at 12:47 PM When we fall in love, life can seem like it's presenting new challenges. And look at the rewards! I love the way you described the amethyst skies and "sunrise kisses." The world "she created" sounds so beautiful that I would never want to leave. What a lovely poem, Chris! Happy Halloween, Carolyn Chris Green October 31, 2019 at 3:09 PM Thank you Carolyn for your visit today and nice wishes. I am thrilled you liked this one. Happy Halloween to you too my friend.

Sandra Adams October 31, 2019 at 12:43 PM This is so gorgeous. It is easy to get lost in other’s words. Your poetry always has that magic of pulling the readers in and holding them in the beauty making them want to linger awhile longer ...exquisite write my friend. Love this :). Hugs Chris Green October 31, 2019 at 3:08 PM Sorry it took me so long to reply, I was lost in a beautiful poem for a while. : ) Thank you my friend. Your kindness is always a smile for me. I appreciate you Sandy.