Poetic Parallels

two sijo

Take note of the resemblance between maple seeds and tadpoles?
Ideas spin round like maple seeds seeking a spot to sprout; 
our minds are small ponds where agile tadpoles (like thoughts) mature. 

Takes about fourteen weeks, but polliwogs will become frogs; 
"Helicopters" become trees after many, many years 
but ideas become poems, sometimes within minutes.

written 8 May 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Greetings Reason. Congrats on your WIN with this wonderful sijo!! ;-)
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:34 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, Reason - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Reason, I enjoyed your metaphors here. Nice one, and congratulations.
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