Jenna Logan Poet Monoku

Poetic Inspiration

My first poem was birthed when diamond stars circled a lustrous pearl moon.




October 3, 2020
Contest: How My First Poem Was Born
Sponsored by JCB Burl
17 syllables: checked with howmanysyllables

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JC Brul October 11, 2020 at 12:15 AM amazing imagery! Congratulations and thank you for sharing this magical moment of your life as a poet. I cannot contain my joy in knowing how your 1st poem came to exist. Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 4:15 AM How very kind of you to like this one so well. It's very encouraging, JCB.

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2020 at 5:29 PM Pretty pretty!! Congrats. Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 4:15 AM Thank you.

John Watt October 8, 2020 at 11:49 AM I've known you as a nature lover ever since your Warm Breath of Summer haiku, Jenna. How inspirational it is to gaze at the stars and moon. Nicely done ~ John Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 4:14 AM How sweet of you to recall that one, John. Thank you.

Line Gauthier October 8, 2020 at 9:57 AM Totally charming ~ I think we can all relate to that first moment of awe looking up at the sky. Superb poem. Congrats ~ Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 4:14 AM Thanks a lot.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2020 at 5:32 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenna Logan November 12, 2020 at 4:13 AM Thanks so much.

Mark Koplin October 5, 2020 at 4:22 AM Such powerful imagery in such few words. Well done! Jenna Logan October 5, 2020 at 2:51 PM I'm encouraged by your thoughts, Mark. Thanks.

Poet Tacito October 4, 2020 at 8:19 PM Charming in its simplicity. Well expressed here, Jenna! :) Jenna Logan October 5, 2020 at 2:50 PM Thank you, Tacito.

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 3:46 PM Wonderful monoku Jenna! Great imagery in few words. Good one for the contest :) Linda Jenna Logan October 5, 2020 at 2:50 PM I always appreciate you support, Linda.

Panagiota Romios October 3, 2020 at 9:14 PM Wow, Jenna, this is so beautiful...I am totally speechless!. Hugs, Pamgie xx Jenna Logan October 4, 2020 at 9:03 AM I am so pleased that you like it enough to leave such glowing thoughts. Thanks, Pangie.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2020 at 12:07 PM - A beautiful birth, Jenna :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 7:06 AM ... she is sweet :) Jenna Logan October 3, 2020 at 2:31 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. It's a girl and her name is 'Sonnet.' ;)

Jennifer Proxenos October 3, 2020 at 9:48 AM Such a lot of talented poetry in a few words, your future laid among the stars which made you a star on poetry soup. Well penned my good friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jenna Logan October 3, 2020 at 9:57 AM Hardly a star poet, Jennifer, but I truly value the kindness of your thoughts. Hugs back to you (((Jennifer)))

John Gondolf October 3, 2020 at 9:47 AM A good place to start, the moon has inspired much beautiful poetry. Best of luck in the contest, Jenna. Hugs. Jenna Logan October 3, 2020 at 9:55 AM Thank you for your ongoing encouragement, John. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham October 3, 2020 at 9:16 AM The day a poetic star was born, shine on Jenna, keep writing. Tom Jenna Logan October 3, 2020 at 9:44 AM oh, Tom, that's such a sweet sentiment. Thank you so much. Hugs for that!

Jan Allison October 3, 2020 at 8:43 AM what gorgeous imagery just in one line:-) hugs jan xx Jenna Logan October 3, 2020 at 9:04 AM Thank you so sincerely, Jan.