Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Poetic -- Hodgepodge

POETIC  Hodgepodge

                                       The early morning sunshine peeks
                                        Over the majestic mountain peaks

                                       The mother louse , would quietly  knit
                                       A butterfly sweater for her newborn nit

                                      Twenty  pounds of dough has been kneaded
                                      For eighty-one cheery pies the  VFW  needed

                                      On a beautiful , brilliant, Blue Moon  night
                                      A fair maiden :Rescued by Sir Valiant knight

                                    My Heartbeats life again : it has found someone New
                                    My Dearest Barbeeg, Barbara Jean : I LOVE YOU
                                                     “ I Thought YOU Knew “

                                         In Dedication to Barbara Jean Gorelick

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Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 11:03 PM Sweet as a cherry pie indeed! These are very entertaining verses. Always, Laura

Sandra Hudson May 14, 2009 at 2:42 PM All ready? Alright! Now all together. Altogether already, All right now! Anyone listening? Any one of you? Anyway, sing any way you choose Maybe we should wait. This may be out last chance. This was fun, I like hodgepodge, yours was better:)-AA

John Loving Iii April 23, 2009 at 4:55 PM sweet. i don't know if this is a response of an invitation tribute. but i do know barbra is a friend of mine and i here from her often and value her oppinion. so what ever you say about her go double for me. JHL

Brian Anderson April 16, 2009 at 10:11 PM that is a wonderful poem for a wonderful writer. well done

Raul Moreno April 16, 2009 at 1:07 AM Beautiful dedication, you are the king of hodgepodge, I must say...Raul

Charmaine Chircop April 15, 2009 at 1:16 PM wonderful tribute-and its great you had the courage to be so sinciere,feelings,its all about heart feelings-wonderfully penned;-)

Laurie Ginn April 15, 2009 at 6:27 AM What a very special write for your special someone, fun write as usual HG.

Sharon Winter April 15, 2009 at 5:47 AM Oh how absolutely beautiful! Two incredibly special people with a rare beauty of spirit. Your poem is a heartfelt work of art, and the person this is dedicated to is so well deserving and more. An amazing way to start my day. Love, Shar

Barbara Gorelick April 14, 2009 at 6:47 PM HG, I'm speechless. I won't ever forget this ..ever. I'll write more when i get my wits back..I Do KNOW..BG Hgarvey Daniel Esquire August 11, 2016 at 11:17 PM Dear Barbara, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit Do YOU (REALLY) KNOW?? I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS...Harry

Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2009 at 6:34 PM Barbara is one of the sweetest and most talented writers, HG. What a lovely image I have of you sweeping her off her feet as Sir Valient! Wonderful tribute! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards April 14, 2009 at 6:20 PM What a lovely dedication!! She will adore this, I'm sure!! ~