Poetic Eyes

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when eyes are poems they speak with a gaze not words~ mirror out feelings. when eyes are harlot they stink like a park keeper~ mirror their hatred.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/28/2024 12:12:00 PM

Aloha! I love the photo it does look like an eyeball. yes you are right. Aloha! /Darlene/

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/25/2024 9:29:00 AM

Hi my friend Lasaad, Eyes can throw daggers whilst they can be as gentle as a lamb but you so well compare hatred and kind sentimental eyes with apt intellectual words. Excellent Haiku. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/5/2024 12:50:00 PM

Very lovely poem. Perhaps I should tone down the mascara. Eye catching has a reason for being a popular saying, I've never heard ear hearing nor nose smelling. Thank you for this haiku.

Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2024 9:10:00 AM

A beautiful pair of haikus reflecting the ambivalent nature of eyes. Also an excellent image to go with it. Eyes can mirror soft sentiments as well as hatred.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/3/2024 8:21:00 AM

SP, sounds like you had a bad experience with a park ranger at some point. There might be a few bad seeds out there. Most of the ones I've met seem to enjoy themselves and have the interest of the public at heart. I also really like how you express the duality of emotion with two completely different sentiments. BTW, great picture!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2024 2:22:00 AM

- Wow, excellent Las :) - hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/2/2024 12:33:00 AM

Very beautifully expressed!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/1/2024 7:26:00 PM

fine study of polarity...intriguing, introspective 'kus from your pen, sotto!