Poetess In the Rain

In the darkened city, she slowly walked.
Baptismal rain droplets on her that seemed
to talk.

The lovable scent of raindrops filled her spirit.
There was God, hope and freshness in it.

She heard the soft meowing of a distant cat..
And marveled that the earth was not flat.

Dreaming of driving through the Rockies one night.
She was reminded that God ruled this earth, not
man and his political hijinks and blights.

Man, still does not get it, peacemakers they are not.
Casinos wide open but places  to honor Gid, not.

The earth withstands the ignorance of man.
The woman, in her raincoat, did know how ther Creator can!

Her wonderful, thoughtful, walk came to an end.
She wished she had a place, to write a letter to
her Creator, that under starlight.....send!


                          8/1/2021
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Eagle Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Good morning - this is so well written and just a pleasure to read.
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:40 AM
Greets...Elena. Nice to get feedback like yours Pangie
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Hello panagiota, yes too bad the poetess did not have a place to create her poetry. hugs xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, oh-- sorry to get that wrong. God knows what is in her heart to write a poem for him. Hugs xx
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Darlene, all it meant was she wished she could write to God directly. Pangie
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Hi Alexis, you penned a wonderful poem, your imagery and symbolism are just incredible, and the flow of your words and sentences is amazing, every stanza is a poem in itself. Blessings and warm hugs
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Lassad, I am not Alexis.I am Panagiota!)) but I am glad you liked this and were so specific in your comments. Fantastico! Panagiota
Cunningham Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Dont worry, he sees everything, one day the evildoers will pay. Tom
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:31 AM
There is a long list of dishonorable humans who willpay, Plenty of world leaders! They do not lead, just push people off cliffs. Their harm to children? Enormous. Their lies to us? Pangie xx
Mckay Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:32 PM
You have woven so much into this poem I love it!
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Thank goodness you saw all the weavings! Thank you Pamgie xx
Romios Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Thank goodness you saw all the weavings! Thank you Pamgie xx
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