Poetess In the Rain

In the darkened city, she slowly walked.
Baptismal rain droplets on her that seemed
to talk.

The lovable scent of raindrops filled her spirit.
There was God, hope and freshness in it.

She heard the soft meowing of a distant cat..
And marveled that the earth was not flat.

Dreaming of driving through the Rockies one night.
She was reminded that God ruled this earth, not
man and his political hijinks and blights.

Man, still does not get it, peacemakers they are not.
Casinos wide open but places  to honor Gid, not.

The earth withstands the ignorance of man.
The woman, in her raincoat, did know how ther Creator can!

Her wonderful, thoughtful, walk came to an end.
She wished she had a place, to write a letter to
her Creator, that under starlight.....send!


                          8/1/2021
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/2/2021 6:53:00 AM
Good morning - this is so well written and just a pleasure to read.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:40:00 AM
Greets...Elena. Nice to get feedback like yours Pangie
Date: 8/1/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hello panagiota, yes too bad the poetess did not have a place to create her poetry. hugs xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2021 11:00:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, oh-- sorry to get that wrong. God knows what is in her heart to write a poem for him. Hugs xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:38:00 AM
Darlene, all it meant was she wished she could write to God directly. Pangie
Date: 8/1/2021 3:39:00 PM
Hi Alexis, you penned a wonderful poem, your imagery and symbolism are just incredible, and the flow of your words and sentences is amazing, every stanza is a poem in itself. Blessings and warm hugs
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:35:00 AM
Lassad, I am not Alexis.I am Panagiota!)) but I am glad you liked this and were so specific in your comments. Fantastico! Panagiota
Date: 8/1/2021 1:48:00 PM
Dont worry, he sees everything, one day the evildoers will pay. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:31:00 AM
There is a long list of dishonorable humans who willpay, Plenty of world leaders! They do not lead, just push people off cliffs. Their harm to children? Enormous. Their lies to us? Pangie xx
Date: 8/1/2021 1:32:00 PM
You have woven so much into this poem I love it!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank goodness you saw all the weavings! Thank you Pamgie xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/3/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thank goodness you saw all the weavings! Thank you Pamgie xx
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