Richard Lamoureux Poet Terzanelle

Poetess Darkly

The poetess walks along a darkened hallway
Listening for the answers in the night
Her heart contained behind a glass doorway

She sees her heart pulsating with white light
Pounding on the opaque glass she screams
listening for the answers in the night

Behind this door imprisoned are her dreams
Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured
pounding on the opaque glass she screams

Some people call this the witching hour
Creatures of the night begin their feast
Heart on a plate waiting to be devoured

Her heart absorbs the energy from the beasts
Creatures of the night no longer feast
The poetess walks along a darkened hallway
Her heart contained behind a glass doorway

July 12/2013

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Red Fiery March 14, 2016 at 9:22 PM such a beautiful write ...Richard, I enjoyed reading this and i wish to read all your poems...I am sure I can do that...Hats off to you for this awesome write...Hugs Red

The Situation July 14, 2013 at 9:36 AM had to see this entry. i'm impressed with the style. Richard Lamoureux July 20, 2013 at 7:42 PM Thanks Situation

Manel Gunatillake July 13, 2013 at 1:56 AM really good u have captured the feelings well my dearest Poet. hugs Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2013 at 5:31 PM Thanks Manel.

Shaz Cheesman July 13, 2013 at 12:56 AM Oh Wow......this is really awesome Rick. I really really liked this piece. ....i could almost picture this story in a movie.....Shaz Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2013 at 6:12 AM Thanks Shaz.

Michael Dom July 12, 2013 at 8:28 PM Hey, darkly written allright. You're so good at terzanelle Richard. Like it. Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2013 at 6:07 AM Thanks Michael

Kim Merryman July 12, 2013 at 5:18 PM Richard, this is fantastic! Very well done! Love, Kim Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 7:36 PM Thanks Kim! Have a wonderful evening.

Poet Destroyer A July 12, 2013 at 5:05 PM Thank you R L., for the comment. I do enjoy Lisa, and I am happy to know that I am part of the reason she desired a contest for herself... I am smiling with her... Good luck In her contest. she will adore this poem. xox....PD Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 7:37 PM I hope she likes it, I read some of her work to get a feel for what she might like.

Skat A July 12, 2013 at 5:01 PM Lisa C, the girl behind a glass doorway. love the way you poet-ed the poet. she is amazing.......... SKAT Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 7:39 PM Thanks SKAT, this is one of the more intresting comments I have received, I like it.