Poetess

Poetess

i am the twisted sister of a twister
lava lady just learning to boil
my words erupt 
yes they are mine
no matter the language
age or blasphemy
i will bid and they will obey

the garnet blood of passion
be it love or otherwise 
will spread its intoxicating infusion
to heat the feeble mind to intensities
that will make the priest weep in his vows
and down in the dives where the hip grinding
sweat soaking miasma of lust cradles
blues will be reborn 

I am the queen bee dripping with honeyed pearls
she who scratches with a stick in mud 
plays keys full of white lightening
here to spread sweet hot spice
on a gray woolsock world.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 10/22/2017 6:18:00 PM
I must have missed this one, Patricia - fantastic read! This is much deserving of POTD -- very well done indeed! Although in my opinion this accolade is very much overdue...anyone of dozens of your poems are well worthy of such high award - fact! My very warmest regards, Patricia. :) john
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Date: 10/20/2017 5:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Patricia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/20/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulation.
Date: 10/16/2017 9:37:00 AM
"Keep spreading your sweet hot spice on this grey woolsock" of a man. Every line of this poem enlivens my curiosity with vivid imagery "dripping with Honey pearls." A delectable dish with hints of bitterness and a hot and spicy flavor with a sweet finish. This is now a favorite poem of mine.
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Date: 10/15/2017 9:41:00 AM
Wow! What a way to describe yourself, Patricia, I see a strong person behind these poetic words, awesome:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 10/15/2017 6:51:00 AM
Spreading her sweet hot spice, sounds exciting Patricia. What a unique style, love it. Congratulations on POTD. So well deserved...Maria
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/15/2017 8:34:00 AM
Welcome to my home and thank you for commenting.
Date: 10/14/2017 10:33:00 PM
The indication of good poetry is "it engages the reader through all the journey while reading it" and it engaged me so a very well written piece it is indeed
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/15/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Lilus.
Date: 10/14/2017 9:23:00 AM
Great passionate portraite Patricia, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/14/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and congratulations. Welcome to my home.
Date: 10/14/2017 8:21:00 AM
My friend, grats on PotD :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/14/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Darren.
Date: 10/14/2017 4:51:00 AM
I'm back...Congratulations on potd Queen P :) Delighted to see you here this morning! Love this honeyed pearl of a pen. Good wonderful morning to you! xomo
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 10/14/2017 9:07:00 AM
Eef! I just peeked at potd when Brad woke up, had to be the first to congratulate you :) After that my dog actually let me sleep in till 9!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/14/2017 5:14:00 AM
Hi sweet pea. Thank you for reading my poem. Couldn't sleep so got up and where else would I go. potd thank you.
Date: 10/12/2017 7:27:00 PM
O Patricia, very sensual and wonderful poem.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Line: is it winter there yet?
Date: 10/12/2017 6:51:00 PM
Triple wowsa X 4! Crackling, sizzling, boiling... like a Habanero teasing a taste bud, no mercy! You continue to raise the bar. I'm gonna run out of wowsas. ~ j
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 7:26:00 PM
Please forgive the typos the words are wows and commenting. damn
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thank you for the wows x 4 I appreciate it and I appreciate you womenting.
Date: 10/12/2017 12:57:00 PM
Excellent piece. Fantastic imagery. Enjoyed all the lines.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my piece.
Date: 10/12/2017 12:28:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem, great write!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Arthur.
Date: 10/12/2017 9:08:00 AM
What a wonderful well written description of a poet. Keep writing.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Frances, welcome to my home.
Date: 10/12/2017 7:52:00 AM
nice write Patricia, a bit like a rap.. i really liked this, a great bio, Ithink.. You are the queen bee dripping with honeyed pearls, a great description... One of your best writes.. Self confidence is excellent.. never lose it..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Comes and goes but sometimes it is right on. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2017 7:26:00 AM
Hail Poetess! So much deliciousness in this, every word :) a fave! xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 2:59:00 PM
Hail to thee O mighty woman! Thanks for your comment.
Date: 10/12/2017 5:41:00 AM
A lovely poem--words of passion!!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/12/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much.
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