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your name implies that you may have wings i can imagine you in the sky your feathers and their sheen glossy like polished purity are you a dancer amongst the stars? unveiling your word songs has you rhythmically orbit mars where we the less fair sex dwell reliving your lines in fantasies where we wish and tell * written fo soup member charlene bird. a great poet and muse

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Date: 5/24/2009 5:08:00 AM
Brian, Congratulations for your placement in the Poetry Soup Poet Tribute contest. I'm sure that Charlene must have felt very honored by your poem. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 5/21/2009 5:10:00 AM
Warmest congrats on your awesome tribute to a lovely and talented poetess! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/21/2009 1:42:00 AM
Brian, nice tribute and congrats on your success in Christies contest...Raul
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Date: 5/21/2009 12:39:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Brian Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:39:00 PM
Congrats brother.
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:40:00 PM
Brian,,congrats on placing in this contest,..great poem friend !! james
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Date: 5/20/2009 2:51:00 PM
Brian - Congratulations on placing in Christie’s, “Poetry Soup Friend Tributes” contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:54:00 AM
A lovely fitting tribute for Charlene Bird, most beautiful,great writing poet....smiles, and thanks for your kind comments on my writing, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:54:00 AM
Biran A. This poem is beautifully written. It is a lovely tribute to Charlene Bird. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:41:00 AM
"Glassy like polished purity" that's my favorite line too... This is a beautiful poem. No way to keep it from flying gracefully off the page. Thanks for posting a great write. Tamra PS thank you for your kind comments on my poems--I'm a newbie to the soup.
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:05:00 AM
"Glassy like polished purity" That's my favourite line here. I love the thought of taking purity and thinking "well this is kind of grubby, let's clean it up!". Absolutely amazing creativity there and through the whole poem also. Thank you, also for your very kind comment about my Plath poem. I adore her work, to be honest actually, without her I doubt I'd even be writing :). Thank you again, Nathaniel
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Date: 4/25/2009 2:57:00 PM
Very dreamy. A fine male fantasy, most males can only say silently. Written for a Bird. What could be finer. Love this one. Love, daver
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:18:00 AM
nice tribute, thank you for encouraging other members and your comments also. John H Loving III
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Date: 4/25/2009 7:00:00 AM
Unique poem. The stanza: where we are the least visible,............releiving... Sounds better for the reader.
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Date: 4/24/2009 10:25:00 PM
wonderful tribute-wonderful---charma
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Date: 4/24/2009 7:42:00 PM
Wow! I am deeply touched, I am honestly at a loss for words here, Thank you, I am honored.
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:48:00 PM
This is a magical charming very well written poem Brian. Love the flow and the form makes it very effective.
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Date: 4/24/2009 6:46:00 PM
So compelling, Brian. Wish I could identify the source of this amazing inspiration, this "dancer amongst the stars." Very intriguing. Are we talking about an "Angel" perhaps?
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