Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Poet Triggering Strokes

The mind picturesque each stroked thought
A heart integrates rough to savvy touch 
Soft lips whispers to form lines of words

Tamed fingers fondle and tip  pen and pad
Feet and fingers dictate iambs and rhyme
Expertise experience breathes the life

Hope each line, will arouse?
Emotions... reveries on pause
To animate, revolutionize, to inspire
More to sadden even put you to dire

Like a kiss that triggers a thousands
So thus each and every creative prose
Beguiling you to fun and travel for free
To world of deep reality or maffick fantasy

Hatching each senses to burst or spur
Even journeying vast to bright stars
Connoisseur of beats sweets and treats
Rocketing fast for exhilarating release

(c) Olive Eloisa
1:26 pm
April 24, 2014
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CONTEST: POEMS ABOUT POETRY 
SPONSOR: 	Kelly Deschler
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James Fraser November 24, 2014 at 11:04 AM Another gem of a title accompanied by a fine write, James :)

Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2014 at 11:22 AM Olive, , Congrats on your poem about poetry. always & forever -- Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 6, 2014 at 4:30 PM Thank You so much Linda. ../) hugs

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2014 at 7:53 AM my, you are one big surprise, olive.. much enjoyed!.. sweet congrats on your fine spot!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 6, 2014 at 4:29 PM Thanks much Nette :) really appreciate your comment :) God bless you always :)

Paul Callus May 3, 2014 at 9:54 AM Hi Olive_eloi! Like your write, this poem manages to arouse the right emotions; thus congrats on a merited win. :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 3, 2014 at 5:58 PM Thanks much Paul.. Appreciate the comment..:) mmmmn God bless you always

Dr.Ram Mehta May 3, 2014 at 5:07 AM Brilliant write on poetry. Congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 4:33 PM Thanks much sir.. I appreciate your kind comments :)God bless and always

Skat A May 2, 2014 at 11:52 PM nice win... Have a nice weekend.. LOVE.... ... SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 4:35 PM Thanks Skat..:) take care always:) I can still remember how you welcome me I here :) thanks much and God bless you..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 2, 2014 at 10:52 PM Heartfelt n wonderful ! Olive it portrays deep emotions on the subject thats is our real self ,,, congrats on great win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:28 PM Thank you very much Dr. Upma.. :) God bless you.. :)

Kelly Deschler May 2, 2014 at 10:42 PM Great use of metaphor in this passionate write. An amazing poem, Olive! Congrats on your win in my contest! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:27 PM thANK YOU VERY MUCH kELLY.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Ivor Kos May 2, 2014 at 10:02 PM WOW. Another admirable win!! With a truly superb poem indeed, I must say! WOW! Congrats on this win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 4, 2014 at 3:35 PM thanks much Ivo :) i appreciate your kind comments :)