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Poet Triggering Strokes

The mind picturesque each stroked thought A heart integrates rough to savvy touch Soft lips whispers to form lines of words Tamed fingers fondle and tip pen and pad Feet and fingers dictate iambs and rhyme Expertise experience breathes the life Hope each line, will arouse? Emotions... reveries on pause To animate, revolutionize, to inspire More to sadden even put you to dire Like a kiss that triggers a thousands So thus each and every creative prose Beguiling you to fun and travel for free To world of deep reality or maffick fantasy Hatching each senses to burst or spur Even journeying vast to bright stars Connoisseur of beats sweets and treats Rocketing fast for exhilarating release (c) Olive Eloisa 1:26 pm April 24, 2014 ----------------»»»»»» CONTEST: POEMS ABOUT POETRY SPONSOR: Kelly Deschler 3RD PLACE

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Date: 11/24/2014 11:04:00 AM
Another gem of a title accompanied by a fine write, James :)
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Date: 5/6/2014 11:22:00 AM
Olive, , Congrats on your poem about poetry. always & forever -- Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/6/2014 4:30:00 PM
Thank You so much Linda. ../) hugs
Date: 5/5/2014 7:53:00 AM
my, you are one big surprise, olive.. much enjoyed!.. sweet congrats on your fine spot!.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/6/2014 4:29:00 PM
Thanks much Nette :) really appreciate your comment :) God bless you always :)
Date: 5/3/2014 9:54:00 AM
Hi Olive_eloi! Like your write, this poem manages to arouse the right emotions; thus congrats on a merited win. :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2014 5:58:00 PM
Thanks much Paul.. Appreciate the comment..:) mmmmn God bless you always
Date: 5/3/2014 5:07:00 AM
Brilliant write on poetry. Congrats on the win, Olive
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Date: 5/4/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thanks much sir.. I appreciate your kind comments :)God bless and always
Date: 5/2/2014 11:52:00 PM
nice win... Have a nice weekend.. LOVE.... ... SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/4/2014 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Skat..:) take care always:) I can still remember how you welcome me I here :) thanks much and God bless you..:)
Date: 5/2/2014 10:52:00 PM
Heartfelt n wonderful ! Olive it portrays deep emotions on the subject thats is our real self ,,, congrats on great win !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Dr. Upma.. :) God bless you.. :)
Date: 5/2/2014 10:42:00 PM
Great use of metaphor in this passionate write. An amazing poem, Olive! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:27:00 PM
thANK YOU VERY MUCH kELLY.. :) GOd bless you.. :)
Date: 5/2/2014 10:02:00 PM
WOW. Another admirable win!! With a truly superb poem indeed, I must say! WOW! Congrats on this win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/4/2014 3:35:00 PM
thanks much Ivo :) i appreciate your kind comments :)

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