Poet On Fire

Fill your page till it is no longer white!
A tsunami painting for others.
Words you pray that have meaning..feeling.

At last! It is now complete.
You sit waiting to see if another poet can relate.

That is part of the joy of poetry.
Like dancing gumballs in a crystalline jar.

         

               March 26, 2020
                  7am PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 7:34 PM
Love that last line... You've made it very hard to stop smiling! Cheers, Gershon
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Ok, Ok,,,I will agree on that last line! Thank you stressing the positive aspects in Poetry. Merci! Panagiota~ xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Hello Panagiota, I like the idea of this poem. I t tells me that poets should create poetry no matter what happens. Enjoy your day. Be strong,be well,be healthy. Hugs Darlene x
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Hello Patagiota, I do like the idea of this poem. No matter wha\t happens i choose health to. Rainbows and Wishes. Hugs Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Greetings...I like the way you stated that...no matter what happens! I choose health, wellness and aliveness! I am not standing in the road waiting to be a victim. That's a Sad place to be...rRainbow wishes, Panagiota xx
Smith Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:34 AM
I like the analogy Panagiota, well said...
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:40 AM
A Joyous Thursday,Charlie! I do appreciate your sunrise comment. Thank you. Rainbow wishes, Panagiota xx
Theraven Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Good morning Panagiota, I want dancing gumballs now. But I'll settle for another cup of coffee. -Richard
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Well, now! Good day, Richard! You provide the coffee, I shall bring those precious gumballs! Rainbow wishes, Panagiotaxx
Poetry Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:13 AM
Exactly, well put PR
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Good Morning From the Sunny West Coast! Thank you TS. Ah, the joy! You are the very first to relate... Rainbow wishes, Panagiota xx
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