Poet, My Friend

What is friendship to me but a culmination
Qualities with signs of kindness and compassion
Earned respect for fair play heed no hesitation
Backbone and humility in the equation
Striving for lofty ideals and ambition
Rising above the mundane orientation
Hints of spirituality’s revelation
With a penchant for beauty, art and creation  

For you, my friend, I have but words of ovation
Your heart thunders proud flaunting determination 
Wielding words like harnessing intoxication
Epitome of virtues’ crystallization




AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on June 10, 2018 for contest QUALITIES YOU ADMIRE IN FRIENDS co-sponsored by CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE AND JACK HORNE  -  RANKED 7TH
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Waters Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Wonderful, especially like the last line - virtues crystallisation - claps
Gauthier Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Virginia.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 12:10 AM
This entry is wonderfully written Line. Congratulations on your win! : )
Gauthier Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Gentry Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 7:04 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful description of qualities in your friends and your tribute too. You portray a lot of those qualities yourself. :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 7:31 PM
What a wonderful thing to say, Susan. Most appreciated.
Wade Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Great piece of work. Congratulations on your win. Faux
Gauthier Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Faux. Much appreciated.
Fisher Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Congrats! Great poem.
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Thank you, Haley. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Many congrats -Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Moorman Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Line, every poet on Soup who reads your entry will say to themselves, "I wish it was me she is referring to." Congratulations on such a brilliant write and win.
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:49 PM
And they would all be right. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Curtis. Most appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations Line. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
Devonshire Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Line, you surely provided some valuable insight into the qualities that make a person a good friend. "Backbone and humility" hadn't occurred to me, but they are important qualities in friends. Thank you for supporting the contest and congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Much appreciated, Carolyn and Jack. Fun contest and very generous prizes!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Standing ovation for your outstanding write! Fellow poets of such genuine qualities but are indeed worthy of your words of pride, love and appreciation! The best of luck for your adept pen and poetic heart in the contest. Shine Line and stay blessed.
Gauthier Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Besma. You are such a delight.
Cunningham Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 3:36 PM
A very thorough description of friendship line. Good luck. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.
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